The more you point out my mistakes, The more you are drawn towards me. The more you try to hurt me, The more you bleed in your heart. The more you run away from me, The more my memories haunt you. The more you want to forget me, The more you are reminded of my presence. The more you want to chase me away, The closer I come to you. The more you hate me, The more you end up loving me. The more you call me an “illusion” The more I dawn as the reality of your life….
Comments
take care and keep writing..........
Metaphor is stunning.
why was she crying :) oooh so many questions come up.. just proves how good the article is .. makes you thing :)
Thank you !
@Ria,
:)
@Tulika,
Thanks ! Glad you liked it.
@Lil' Priya,
Not exactly. Its a kind of telepathy I guess.
@Mayz,
Thanks !
@Priya,
:)
@ DI,
Yeah,it does....
Pleased to see your comment.
@Sushobhan,
I tried flipping the passages as you said. Yes,it sounded well. Maybe I'll experiment with it sometime soon.
@VO,
Thanks !!!
@Simu,
Yeah,I meant it to be 'spooky'. Glad to see that you get what exactly I wanted to convey.