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THE DARK SECRET



  Its official.
 Its broken.
Snapping last ties.

A scuffle.
An unintended touch.
Eyes meet.
Differences begin to melt.
A trifle glance.
A weird smile follows.
A maddening moment.
Heart beats faster.
 Fail to utter words.
A strange affinity.
Reason loses to impulse.
Charmed ,enamoured.
Lips lock.
 Emotions fused.
Bliss.

Sun rises.
Regrets.
A nocturnal mistake.
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Tulika said…
:)

Truly Breathtaking !
June 28, 2010 at 10:36 AM
The Enchantress said…
LIPS LOCKED..
EMOTIONS FUSED...LOVELY...LOVELY...
June 28, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Rià said…
hmm...interesting and a matured subject. :)
June 28, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Lucifer said…
mistake???

believe me i wud love to commit this one mistake over n over again

beautifully penned down thou!
June 28, 2010 at 4:36 PM
IceMaiden said…
Brought me face to face in my mind, with a person I no longer know
June 28, 2010 at 10:26 PM
Ritz.. said…
speechless.........


wishes
Ritz..
www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com
June 29, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Bikramjit Singh Mann said…
nice one .. But if its a mistake then no shame in going back and saying sorry :)

and regrets will always be there whatevr happens regrets do come up now and then....
June 29, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Richa said…
its as awesome as ever and its pretty good to be back here :)
June 30, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Abhishek Behera said…
i read this before somewhere..?
June 30, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Anwesa said…
@Pooja,
Thanks !
July 1, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Anwesa said…
@Tulika,
Thanks !
July 1, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Anwesa said…
@Aditi,
Thank you !
July 1, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Anwesa said…
@Nikita,
Thanks !
July 1, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Anwesa said…
@Ria,
Glad to know that you found it interesting :)
July 1, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Anwesa said…
@Lil' Priya,
:)
Thanks baby !
July 1, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Anwesa said…
@Mayz,
Well,depends on how you see it :)
Thanks for reading it.
July 1, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Anwesa said…
@Ice Maiden,
:)
July 1, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Anwesa said…
@Ritz,
Thanks !!
July 1, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Anwesa said…
@Bikramjit,
Sometimes its irrelevant to apologise.
July 1, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Anwesa said…
@Richa,
Thanks dear ! Glad to see you here :)
July 1, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Anwesa said…
@Simu,
Yes,you have. I wrote it long back for Femme Fatale.
July 1, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Thousif Raza said…
truth coming out of every sentence :)... nice one :)

take care and keep writing.............
July 4, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Anwesa said…
@Thousif,

They are so right when they say "One man's fiction is another's reality".
July 4, 2010 at 9:25 PM
Anonymous said…
beautifully written :)
July 5, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Anwesa said…
@inmylineofsight,

Thanks !
July 5, 2010 at 10:08 AM
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