The more you point out my mistakes,
The more you are drawn towards me.
The more you try to hurt me,
The more you bleed in your heart.
The more you run away from me,
The more my memories haunt you.
The more you want to forget me,
The more you are reminded of my presence.
The more you want to chase me away,
The closer I come to you.
The more you hate me,
The more you end up loving me.
The more you call me an “illusion”
The more I dawn as the reality of your life….
The more you are drawn towards me.
The more you try to hurt me,
The more you bleed in your heart.
The more you run away from me,
The more my memories haunt you.
The more you want to forget me,
The more you are reminded of my presence.
The more you want to chase me away,
The closer I come to you.
The more you hate me,
The more you end up loving me.
The more you call me an “illusion”
The more I dawn as the reality of your life….
Comments
thanx dear!!
best of luck !
nice one...actually too nice to be called nice..
I have always believed so...good one girlie.
beautiful concept...
just beautiful:)
thanks for writing this.
hugs and tc
the more your beauty brings me to you
the more i stop to read you
the more you make me love the reading
the more i wish u to write
the more you use your pen
the more i smile at your beauty
the more beautiful you become
nice lines dear....i felt these lines after reading yours..hope you like them..!!!
loved those lines...beautiful!!!
thanx..
thanx dear!!glad 2 see u here!!
its perfect the way you penned it down!!! :)
beautiful as always..
thanx ....
thanx....
thanx...
thanx dear!!!keep blogging..
thanx....long tym...glad 2 c u..
i wish i cud b able 2 reply 2 u in poetry..but thanx a lot..for making my day beautiful..
i wish i were an illusion,
but i'm real,though shrouded in mist.
thanx 4 reading...
thanx dear!!!lotz of luv..
i esp liked the last two lines :)
**The more you run away from me,
The more my memories haunt you.
I somehow love that one the most...cos its so true in many aspects of life.
Keshi.
:)
thanx dear!!
thanx ..i think the last two lines sum up d entire post..
thanx 4 reading dear!!n i liked ur reply..
thanx..means a lot coz its 4m u..
The more i forgive u...
sighzzz.. wish i cud be so strong every time...okzz i changed that line..
well,ur line sounded like the last words of Jesus Christ.I wish we could be that strong..
thanx dear!!!
Cheers
thanx...(un)lucky someone...
thanx dear!!!!
Your composition bears a surreal similarity to my blog title and tag line.
Keep writing. Spread the voice.
Peace. Have a nice weekend.
lovely...i mean beautiful...:)
wow-ed me!
keep smiling..
thanx 4 reading!!yes,i noticed what you meant...
thanx dear!!!
thanx 4 visiting!!!
really?then i do deserve a pat on my back!!well done Anwesa!!
urs..hemu..
thanx...
yeah,i agree..thanx 4 visiting..
:)
wow man!!ur very creative.i nvr thot on "horror" lines..but u nvr end up loving a ghost,do u ?
ur comment once again reminded me dat ur a 1st rate ntertainer on blogger..keep blogging..
thanx 4 visiting..
Very well put
thanx 4 visiting..
P.S : Anwesa, you have been tagged! do pick it up from my blog.
thanx 4 reading!!i'm a music maniac n ll take up d tag 4 sure!!
I am blogrolling you! :)
thanx dear...keep blogging..
good stuff gal..good stuff
thanx 4 reading..
neatly written
i am glad to see these posts.
just a little suggestion, don't do any more tags
thanx 4 reading..
i'll give ur suggestion a thot..
thanx 4 reading...
thanx...
Good one, infact sometimes its difficult to think of various directions in which we want to make the theme go...
Like in yours case...it was beautifully justified....
Is that also the case in case of LOVE..
i am sure its not... :)
After your reply to my comment in yamini's 149th post, i have come down to check your craziness and sanity... :P
Hope we can make friends..
Cheers
thanx 4 visiting..its gr8 2 c u took tym off n wrote a detailed reply here..keep blogging..
Blogrolling you, cheers...
thanx 4 visiting n givin such an ncouraging reply...
harry
do comment on ma blog...
thanx dear!!just visited ur blog n posted a reply..
nicely done
thanx!!!
Nice.
:-)
thanx 4 visiting n postin a reply!!
keep blogging!!
thanx...it was ncouraging 2 hear dat..
first time here. loved it very very much. will be back...
thanx dear!!gr8 2 see a new reader..gonna visit ur blog soon..
lets keep blogging...
beautifully done!
thanx dear!!
thanx dear!!!!
thanx...
BTW, I guess, ghost do attract/temp people, but lust might be a more correct word.
:)
nah!!this post is nowhere close to theme of lust.i'm sure abt it !!
very very meaningful and understanding:)
Is it based on real contradictions in your life?
Just a suggestion:enable comment moderation.That way you will also get to know when somebody replies to a post after such a long time.(Its just a suggestion-please don't mind)
thanx 4 d reply dear...this poem is somewat an expression of my experiences,not totally tho...
i dint enable comment moderation coz i wanted to give my readers complete freedom to speak their mind,without inhibitions.dun worry,i'll reply 2 all d comments u post...keep smiling...
urs..hemu..
Coming after a long time and found a gud piece...very true lines
:)
i'll visit ur place asap...i was bg 4 my xams...now its over...
hey!!nice 2 see u...thanx 4 ur appreciation...