Engulfed by pain
I cry helplessly.
No glimmer of hope
In sight.
I await freedom
Bound in chains of life.
Will this darkness
Never dispel ?
Good always triumphs
Over evil.
When shall it happen
With me? I await freedom…..
The more you point out my mistakes, The more you are drawn towards me. The more you try to hurt me, The more you bleed in your heart. The more you run away from me, The more my memories haunt you. The more you want to forget me, The more you are reminded of my presence. The more you want to chase me away, The closer I come to you. The more you hate me, The more you end up loving me. The more you call me an “illusion” The more I dawn as the reality of your life….
Comments
सहमा सहमा सा इंतज़ार करता है
गम के अँधेरे मंजर मे à¤ी
ये दिल जीने का इंतज़ार करता है
Hope you get your freedom... soon! :)
nice piece!! I feel d essence of d kinda poetry i do in dis write-up..
It stirred many desires.
the silence, the await all shall end soon with a nice smile on your face :)
best wishes :)
on a more serious note - why so sad? what happened?
unless it the 'L' word ;)
well whatever it is let u find freedom :)
take care and keep writing.............
I so very like it :)
urs..hemu..
All the Best!
that was a lovely verse. thanks for coming here.
Thanks!!!!
thanks!!
:)
:) thanks!!
that was such a sweet reply..thanks!!
yes, jay and kay effect undeniably!
sad...a bit of a trivial issue..now its gone.
thank u !!
trying to...
:) in search of it...
thank u !!!
:)
but jan 26 was close by :P
thanks!!!!
perhaps...
freedom from the chains of life...
sorry,cudnt understand "the freedom other than the one we want"
thanks for visiting though !
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!