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I AWAIT FREEDOM......

Engulfed by pain


I cry helplessly.



No glimmer of hope


In sight.



I await freedom


Bound in chains of life.



Will this darkness


Never dispel ?



Good always triumphs


Over evil.



When shall it happen


With me? I await freedom…..

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Ankur said…
समां खामोश सा बेक़रार करता है
सहमा सहमा सा इंतज़ार करता है
गम के अँधेरे मंजर मे भी
ये दिल जीने का इंतज़ार करता है

Hope you get your freedom... soon! :)
January 21, 2010 at 2:51 AM
Pooja said…
Freedom awaits u! u jus need 2 break d chain.. :)

nice piece!! I feel d essence of d kinda poetry i do in dis write-up..
January 21, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Rià said…
nicely done gurl!!
January 21, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Tulika said…
Nice verse.

It stirred many desires.
January 21, 2010 at 4:31 PM
The West Wind said…
Nice post.. Very insghtful :)
January 21, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Pankhuri said…
Wait until you succeed !

the silence, the await all shall end soon with a nice smile on your face :)

best wishes :)
January 22, 2010 at 1:42 AM
Abhishek Behera said…
coincidence- after publishing mine i see didi has a similar post! (certainly not the same but similar - hope and eternity and despair). The Jay-AND-Kay effect? :)

on a more serious note - why so sad? what happened?
January 22, 2010 at 3:00 AM
Cinderella said…
Freedom....tough subject. For me in all in our minds. Open it!
January 22, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Thousif Raza said…
interesting......... but what makes you say that?, you love to study, alwayz drink your milk, have24 hour internet, aur kya chahiye????? ;)

unless it the 'L' word ;)

well whatever it is let u find freedom :)


take care and keep writing.............
January 22, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Me said…
After a long time, there comes a post which is dark yet sensitive, from you.

I so very like it :)
January 23, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Quest said…
On a lighter note Aug 15 is still far away ;)
January 24, 2010 at 12:24 AM
Hemanth Potluri said…
nicely written sis :)..

urs..hemu..
January 24, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Rajlakshmi said…
very beautifully penned... good used to triumph over evil... reply it seems is stuck somewhere in between...
January 26, 2010 at 11:39 PM
How do we know said…
kabhi kabhi, a freedom other than the one we want, is also possible.. na?

All the Best!
January 27, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Anwesa said…
@ankur,
that was a lovely verse. thanks for coming here.
January 27, 2010 at 9:30 PM
Anwesa said…
@Pooja,
Thanks!!!!
January 27, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Anwesa said…
@west wind,

:) thanks!!
January 27, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Anwesa said…
@pankhuri,
that was such a sweet reply..thanks!!
January 27, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Anwesa said…
@simu,

yes, jay and kay effect undeniably!

sad...a bit of a trivial issue..now its gone.
January 27, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Anwesa said…
@cindrella,
trying to...
January 27, 2010 at 10:39 PM
Anwesa said…
@thousif,

:) in search of it...
January 27, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Anwesa said…
@harshita,
thank u !!!
January 27, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Anwesa said…
@quest,
:)

but jan 26 was close by :P
January 27, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Anwesa said…
@rajlakshmi,
perhaps...
January 28, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Anwesa said…
@Neethu,
freedom from the chains of life...
January 28, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Anwesa said…
@how do we know,

sorry,cudnt understand "the freedom other than the one we want"

thanks for visiting though !
January 28, 2010 at 11:28 AM
The Other Hypocrite said…
excellent... well done sister
March 16, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Anwesa said…
@jogi,
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
March 16, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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