Engulfed by pain
I cry helplessly.
No glimmer of hope
In sight.
I await freedom
Bound in chains of life.
Will this darkness
Never dispel ?
Good always triumphs
Over evil.
When shall it happen
With me? I await freedom…..
Engulfed by pain
I cry helplessly.
No glimmer of hope
In sight.
I await freedom
Bound in chains of life.
Will this darkness
Never dispel ?
Good always triumphs
Over evil.
When shall it happen
With me? I await freedom…..
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सहमा सहमा सा इंतज़ार करता है
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ये दिल जीने का इंतज़ार करता है
Hope you get your freedom... soon! :)
nice piece!! I feel d essence of d kinda poetry i do in dis write-up..
It stirred many desires.
the silence, the await all shall end soon with a nice smile on your face :)
best wishes :)
on a more serious note - why so sad? what happened?
unless it the 'L' word ;)
well whatever it is let u find freedom :)
take care and keep writing.............
I so very like it :)
urs..hemu..
All the Best!
that was a lovely verse. thanks for coming here.
Thanks!!!!
thanks!!
:)
:) thanks!!
that was such a sweet reply..thanks!!
yes, jay and kay effect undeniably!
sad...a bit of a trivial issue..now its gone.
thank u !!
trying to...
:) in search of it...
thank u !!!
:)
but jan 26 was close by :P
thanks!!!!
perhaps...
freedom from the chains of life...
sorry,cudnt understand "the freedom other than the one we want"
thanks for visiting though !
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!