I know it was you, following me all along. I don’t need eyes to see you. It started raining and I paced up. You were anxious about me.You offered me your umbrella with your face hidden.Only if you had understood me ! I never said those three words, but I thought you knew. P.S 1:My first attempt at 55 fiction. P.S : A real big thank you to all blogger friends who made my birthday "A day to remember".
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Love,
Nikhil
Take care mate... cheers..
take care and keep writing.........
john
http://imeandnotsomuchofmyself.blogspot.com/
You makes Hat-trick. Loved the depiction of "You" every time.
You, behind life.
Beautiful.
:)
Some lines I like the best -
You understand my silence…
You make me smile anyhow…
Who is this 'You' :P
take care
i dunno...maybe its tucked somewhere in my mind.
sorry..couldn't get you.
an overflow of powerful emotions i guess...
thanks !
maybe coz' the other name of love is pain.
You-a figment of my imagination.
I'm hale and hearty.
:)
thanks! that's how I see my You...
sorry,couldn't get you.
thanks baby !
:) thanks!!
thanks mate !
:)
You-my personal fantasy :)