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YOU


I’ll know its “You” when-

You see my unshed tears..

You understand my silence…

You make me smile anyhow…

You read the pain in my eyes…

You take me to the world of bliss…

You hold my hand in adversity…

And some odd day,

Be lost in the cold mists !
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Rià said…
why hav u started writing only painful poems these days!?
March 11, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Nikhil Menon said…
Why u despo mummy?? :P

Love,
Nikhil
March 11, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Arv said…
yeah, why such themed poems??

Take care mate... cheers..
March 11, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Thousif Raza said…
nice... very nice :)



take care and keep writing.........
March 11, 2010 at 3:25 PM
john said…
why is it true love stories end in separation most of the times, ever wondered about it?

john
http://imeandnotsomuchofmyself.blogspot.com/
March 11, 2010 at 5:16 PM
k.ø.c.h.ü said…
ahem ahem..shhhh WHO'S YOU niway ;) #cheer up k ;)
March 12, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Tulika said…
last line - shudders.

You makes Hat-trick. Loved the depiction of "You" every time.
You, behind life.

Beautiful.
March 15, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Vinz said…
I hope, only to emerge with flowers..!!

:)
March 15, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Priya Joyce said…
vy touching yet again!!
March 16, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Esther said…
Aw very nice! :-)
Some lines I like the best -
You understand my silence…

You make me smile anyhow…
March 17, 2010 at 11:52 AM
rainboy said…
lovely...

Who is this 'You' :P

take care
March 17, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Anwesa said…
@ria,
i dunno...maybe its tucked somewhere in my mind.
March 18, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Anwesa said…
@MM,
sorry..couldn't get you.
March 18, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Anwesa said…
@Arv,
an overflow of powerful emotions i guess...
March 18, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Anwesa said…
@thousif,
thanks !
March 18, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Anwesa said…
@John,
maybe coz' the other name of love is pain.
March 19, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Anwesa said…
@Kochu,
You-a figment of my imagination.

I'm hale and hearty.
March 19, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Anwesa said…
@tulika,
:)

thanks! that's how I see my You...
March 19, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Anwesa said…
@vinz,
sorry,couldn't get you.
March 19, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
thanks baby !
March 19, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Anwesa said…
@jogi,
:) thanks!!
March 19, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Anwesa said…
@esther,
thanks mate !
March 19, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Anwesa said…
@rainboy,
:)

You-my personal fantasy :)
March 19, 2010 at 6:37 PM
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