I had tears…..
You kissed them away.
I had wounds….
You healed them.
I had debts….
You settled them.
I had dreams…..
You turned them real.
I had wishes…..
You fulfilled them.
I had apprehensions……
You removed them.
I had thoughts….
You put them in words.
I had love……
You made it my life.
You kissed them away.
I had wounds….
You healed them.
I had debts….
You settled them.
I had dreams…..
You turned them real.
I had wishes…..
You fulfilled them.
I had apprehensions……
You removed them.
I had thoughts….
You put them in words.
I had love……
You made it my life.
34 REPLIES:
and the you is????
Nikhil
@Multimenon,
well,that "million dollar question" is unanswered till date.
Thanks for being the first to read and react!!:D
shakehands.
Magnificence in 16 lines.. wonderful
lovely! :)
i knew it was the unknown guy.. or it would have been i wanted love,you gave hate sorts of lines..simple and nice..free
find tat "u" soon dear....:):)
:P
It's such a sweet poem !
Loved reading it. :)
loved the poem.btw who is this abt??
well the you, as much as i wanna be that you i am not getting a chance..... hope you find your 'you' who is just the same and more good luck ;)
take care and keep writing..........
me likes...
cant stop smiling and cant stop reading!
Simply touching
:)
simple and sweet... lovely. best wishes.
@Hobo,
:)
@Jogi(I'm going Megi's way :P),
Thanks!!!!!
@ice maiden,
thanks dear!!!
@soin,
:) Dreams are always wonderful coz they are not real.
@lil' priya,
soon...y ?
I wanna give "You" sometime before I screw up his/(her?) life :P :P
@Tulika,
thanks!!!!
@Ria,
thanks!!!
"You" is still in my imagination :P
**Yet to emerge out of the shell of fantasy,unto the realm of reality.....**
@Thousif,
**well the you, as much as i wanna be that you i am not getting a chance.....
lolz
"Chance favours the prepared mind." -Louis Pasteur
Thanks for the wishes...
@vicky,
thanks!!!!
@AD,
really? That gives me immense pleasure....
@Aneesh,
thanks!!!!! good to see you here. How's Divya?
@abhishek sim,
glad you liked it.
best wishes for... ?
Finding "You" ????
who is this abt sis.....its so nicely penned :)...
urs..hemu..
@Hemanth,
"You" is in fiction right now :P
She's doing fine. Thanks :)
I'll convey your regards to her :)
BTW, once in a while come up with some post like you did, old times eh?
Your poems are cool but I'm missing that too
:)
@aneesh,
yup,ll try to bring back those old times back...soon....
well written... :)
@Phoenix,
thanks!!!
That is something:))
@Priya,
:) :) nice to see you here...
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