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MY TREASURES


I had tears…..
You kissed them away.

I had wounds….
You healed them.

I had debts….
You settled them.

I had dreams…..
You turned them real.

I had wishes…..
You fulfilled them.

I had apprehensions……
You removed them.

I had thoughts….
You put them in words.

I had love……
You made it my life.
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Nikhil Menon said…
and the you is????

Nikhil
November 7, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Anwesa said…
@Multimenon,
well,that "million dollar question" is unanswered till date.

Thanks for being the first to read and react!!:D
November 7, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Anonymous said…
shakehands.
November 7, 2009 at 8:29 AM
The Other Hypocrite said…
Magnificence in 16 lines.. wonderful
November 7, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Soin said…
i knew it was the unknown guy.. or it would have been i wanted love,you gave hate sorts of lines..simple and nice..free
November 7, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Priya Joyce said…
find tat "u" soon dear....:):)

:P
November 7, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Tulika said…
It's such a sweet poem !

Loved reading it. :)
November 7, 2009 at 7:21 PM
Rià said…
loved the poem.btw who is this abt??
November 7, 2009 at 9:30 PM
Thousif Raza said…
well the you, as much as i wanna be that you i am not getting a chance..... hope you find your 'you' who is just the same and more good luck ;)




take care and keep writing..........
November 8, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Americanising Desi said…
cant stop smiling and cant stop reading!
November 9, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Aneesh said…
Simply touching
:)
November 9, 2009 at 4:42 PM
Abhishek Behera said…
simple and sweet... lovely. best wishes.
November 9, 2009 at 11:06 PM
Anwesa said…
@Jogi(I'm going Megi's way :P),
Thanks!!!!!
November 11, 2009 at 9:14 PM
Anwesa said…
@ice maiden,
thanks dear!!!
November 11, 2009 at 9:14 PM
Anwesa said…
@soin,
:) Dreams are always wonderful coz they are not real.
November 11, 2009 at 9:15 PM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
soon...y ?

I wanna give "You" sometime before I screw up his/(her?) life :P :P
November 11, 2009 at 9:17 PM
Anwesa said…
@Tulika,
thanks!!!!
November 11, 2009 at 9:18 PM
Anwesa said…
@Ria,
thanks!!!
"You" is still in my imagination :P

**Yet to emerge out of the shell of fantasy,unto the realm of reality.....**
November 11, 2009 at 9:21 PM
Anwesa said…
@Thousif,
**well the you, as much as i wanna be that you i am not getting a chance.....

lolz

"Chance favours the prepared mind." -Louis Pasteur

Thanks for the wishes...
November 11, 2009 at 9:22 PM
Anwesa said…
@vicky,
thanks!!!!
November 11, 2009 at 9:23 PM
Anwesa said…
@AD,
really? That gives me immense pleasure....
November 11, 2009 at 9:23 PM
Anwesa said…
@Aneesh,
thanks!!!!! good to see you here. How's Divya?
November 11, 2009 at 9:24 PM
Anwesa said…
@abhishek sim,
glad you liked it.
best wishes for... ?

Finding "You" ????
November 11, 2009 at 9:25 PM
Hemanth Potluri said…
who is this abt sis.....its so nicely penned :)...

urs..hemu..
November 12, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Anwesa said…
@Hemanth,
"You" is in fiction right now :P
November 12, 2009 at 7:08 PM
Aneesh said…
She's doing fine. Thanks :)
I'll convey your regards to her :)
BTW, once in a while come up with some post like you did, old times eh?
Your poems are cool but I'm missing that too
:)
November 17, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Anwesa said…
@aneesh,
yup,ll try to bring back those old times back...soon....
November 17, 2009 at 10:15 PM
Anwesa said…
@Phoenix,
thanks!!!
November 21, 2009 at 6:22 PM
Priya said…
That is something:))
December 1, 2009 at 11:08 PM
Anwesa said…
@Priya,
:) :) nice to see you here...
December 4, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Saraswathan said…
You have the knack of weaving words into a beautiful theme! Well done dear.
December 21, 2009 at 2:16 AM
Anwesa said…
@saraswathan,
thanks!!!
January 13, 2010 at 11:00 PM
Thє SτσIc said…
the image perfectly complemented you write .. speaking of treasures here is a small write :-

What need have i for coins of gold
if they can't buy happiness for thee
My treasure lies in your smiles
stamped in the mint of memory...
February 1, 2011 at 9:24 PM
Anwesa said…
@the stoic,
Thanks ! I had googled the pic.
Your lines were awesome :)
February 3, 2011 at 1:06 PM
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