I reminisce the twilights
When you and I sat in composure,
Dwelling on the frivolities of life.
We charmed each other and
Proclaimed our love to the world.
Rapturous meetings continued-
There was an air of reckless affection.
We might have been alienated by circumstances
But dear !
My mind and spirit are still yours.
Think of me in the darkest hours,
I’ll be there for you-
Together we shall annihilate
All our foes.
We were always meant to be together
So what if fate did not bring us close forever ?
The beauty of “us” is eternal.
When you and I sat in composure,
Dwelling on the frivolities of life.
We charmed each other and
Proclaimed our love to the world.
Rapturous meetings continued-
There was an air of reckless affection.
We might have been alienated by circumstances
But dear !
My mind and spirit are still yours.
Think of me in the darkest hours,
I’ll be there for you-
Together we shall annihilate
All our foes.
We were always meant to be together
So what if fate did not bring us close forever ?
The beauty of “us” is eternal.
P.S: Please do read the previous post- a 55f.
Comments
its very beautiful anwesa, very
i updated my blog, hope to cya soon
and abt your suprise, you will love it when you will get it, until then.......
take care and keep writing........
He is lucky!!!!!!!!!
Air of reckless affection!!!!!!! Ah!!
SO romantic!! Nice!
touched ..:)
ahh some are beautiful and some are haunting...
and I can surely say that you have captured those hidden emotions well :)
take care mate... cheers...
but this is a b'ful one :)
A beautiful poem.
I think i might steal your poem someday to wow the person i love...
really your poems have that thing..
I read and commented already on 55f.
Keep writing..
Cheers
I havent seen you around my blog
:-(
Hope to see you around...
Love the way u end a post
In this case
"The beauty of “us” is eternal. "
Nice :)
thanx a lot!!!
i felt something was missin in d previous 55f.....mayb it wasnt from my heart...
"you"....very near yet very far....
thanx 4 reading!!!
mayb i'm exploring varying emotions....
glad dat u liked d post....
thanx dear!!!
**memories...
ahh some are beautiful and some are haunting...
yes,true..
thanx a lot!!!!
** who is he?
i wish i had known him...
not really...der s sum difference between "you" n "dear you" :)
**y isnt my comment there?? i fail to understand were do my comments go wen i post them :(
i'm clueless too....
thanx 4 reading!!
**I think i might steal your poem someday to wow the person i love...
really? but do quote the poems as mine...
i'm gettin 4getful dese dez...i read ur post but 4got 2 comment..
thanx 4 reading!!!!!
thanx.....
thanx 4 coming dear!!!hope u come here often...n glad dat u liked d post...
we guys r preparing 2 love each other(more than evr b4) in addition to waging a war against our enemies :)
hmm..prolly,ur d 1st person on the post 2 notice d pathos...
i'm curious 2 know wat exactly u think of abt "story behind the story" :)
thanx a lot for reading me so intently !! :)
there is lot more to say but words fail me here :) :)
Intense & Profound...
Loved the last line :)
Keep writing, oops typing :)
Ending up together is not a necessity for a thing of BEAUTY.
Genuine point there Anwesa!
Keshi.
thank u...dat was gr8 2 hear 4m u...
thanx 4 reading dear!!!
dats wat i genuinely believe in..
keep writting...
Ur saying, "Dwelling on the frivolities of life", so very true. as a couple there are many small bumps one need to climb over. Together!
Liked the work a lot. Take care!
u can b 2gether even if ur miles apart physically...ur "spl sum1" trascends d boundaries of being ur lover,he/she is ur spirit...it doesnt matter if ur wid sum1,ur "spl sum1" ll alwez b urs..4evr..
i luvd ur response :) i ncourage a few more queries like this...
thanx!!!!
thanx!!!nice 2 c u here...
thank u....
:)
thanx!!!