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DEAR YOU,


I reminisce the twilights
When you and I sat in composure,
Dwelling on the frivolities of life.
We charmed each other and
Proclaimed our love to the world.
Rapturous meetings continued-
There was an air of reckless affection.

We might have been alienated by circumstances
But dear !
My mind and spirit are still yours.
Think of me in the darkest hours,
I’ll be there for you-
Together we shall annihilate
All our foes.

We were always meant to be together
So what if fate did not bring us close forever ?
The beauty of “us” is eternal.
P.S: Please do read the previous post- a 55f.

Comments

i like this even more than the last post,

its very beautiful anwesa, very

i updated my blog, hope to cya soon

and abt your suprise, you will love it when you will get it, until then.......


take care and keep writing........
Rajesh said…
Who is that 'YOU'?
He is lucky!!!!!!!!!
Air of reckless affection!!!!!!! Ah!!
SO romantic!! Nice!
Priya Joyce said…
anwesa wazz goin on..seems like u r in the river of emotions..of all kind..the experience was like up and down..as the notes of a song...
touched ..:)
Ria said…
really nice and romantic poem. :)
rabbit said…
memories...
ahh some are beautiful and some are haunting...
Arv said…
I still feel it... and I still live with it :)

and I can surely say that you have captured those hidden emotions well :)

take care mate... cheers...
Chriz said…
lovely.. who is he?
Anonymous said…
i m sure the 'other one' here is ur own self:P
яノςんム said…
y isnt my comment there?? i fail to understand were do my comments go wen i post them :(

but this is a b'ful one :)
Anwesa,

A beautiful poem.
I think i might steal your poem someday to wow the person i love...

really your poems have that thing..

I read and commented already on 55f.

Keep writing..

Cheers
Anwesa

I havent seen you around my blog
:-(

Hope to see you around...
Anurag said…
Read the 55 ficition earlier....
Love the way u end a post
In this case
"The beauty of “us” is eternal. "

Nice :)
ANWESA said…
@Thousif Raza M B,
thanx a lot!!!
i felt something was missin in d previous 55f.....mayb it wasnt from my heart...
ANWESA said…
@rajesh,
"you"....very near yet very far....

thanx 4 reading!!!
ANWESA said…
@lil' priya,
mayb i'm exploring varying emotions....
glad dat u liked d post....
ANWESA said…
@ria,
thanx dear!!!
ANWESA said…
@rabbit,
**memories...
ahh some are beautiful and some are haunting...

yes,true..
ANWESA said…
@arv,
thanx a lot!!!!
ANWESA said…
@chriz,
** who is he?

i wish i had known him...
ANWESA said…
@superunknown,
not really...der s sum difference between "you" n "dear you" :)
ANWESA said…
@richa,
**y isnt my comment there?? i fail to understand were do my comments go wen i post them :(

i'm clueless too....

thanx 4 reading!!
ANWESA said…
@mahesh,
**I think i might steal your poem someday to wow the person i love...

really? but do quote the poems as mine...
i'm gettin 4getful dese dez...i read ur post but 4got 2 comment..

thanx 4 reading!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@anurag,
thanx.....
Anonymous said…
Sorry i m really late to visit your page !! but i liked this one :)
Mayz said…
u guys preparin for love or war??
ABHISHEK SiM said…
hurtful. intense. so close to reality. a particular line is a bit disturbing. i feel the unsaid words behind the said ones - but it's only my speculation that there is a story behind the story.. :)
ANWESA said…
@pretty me!!,
thanx 4 coming dear!!!hope u come here often...n glad dat u liked d post...
ANWESA said…
@mayz,
we guys r preparing 2 love each other(more than evr b4) in addition to waging a war against our enemies :)
ANWESA said…
@abhishek sim,
hmm..prolly,ur d 1st person on the post 2 notice d pathos...

i'm curious 2 know wat exactly u think of abt "story behind the story" :)

thanx a lot for reading me so intently !! :)

there is lot more to say but words fail me here :) :)
Anonymous said…
I needn't say it, but then again, I'll just do... Too good :)

Intense & Profound...

Loved the last line :)

Keep writing, oops typing :)
Keshi said…
beautifully put!

Ending up together is not a necessity for a thing of BEAUTY.

Genuine point there Anwesa!

Keshi.
ANWESA said…
@miss kido,
thank u...dat was gr8 2 hear 4m u...
ANWESA said…
@keshi,
thanx 4 reading dear!!!
dats wat i genuinely believe in..
Gayathri said…
still..being together means a lot right??if not together,not being with someone else,so that at least our thoughts are filled by that soul mate is quite imp in my opinion?
Abhishek Prasad said…
ur words are amazing... i likd it... aur lagta hai ab humesha visit karna padega...
keep writting...
Itzme said…
so romantic..the wordings are two perfect
Anonymous said…
Pure! Eternal!

Ur saying, "Dwelling on the frivolities of life", so very true. as a couple there are many small bumps one need to climb over. Together!

Liked the work a lot. Take care!
ANWESA said…
@gayathri,
u can b 2gether even if ur miles apart physically...ur "spl sum1" trascends d boundaries of being ur lover,he/she is ur spirit...it doesnt matter if ur wid sum1,ur "spl sum1" ll alwez b urs..4evr..
ANWESA said…
@gayathri,
i luvd ur response :) i ncourage a few more queries like this...
ANWESA said…
@abhishek prasad,
thanx!!!!
ANWESA said…
@itzme,
thanx!!!nice 2 c u here...
ANWESA said…
@kulpreet,
thank u....
:)
ANWESA said…
@mahi,
thanx!!!

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