I know it was you, following me all along. I don’t need eyes to see you. It started raining and I paced up. You were anxious about me.You offered me your umbrella with your face hidden.Only if you had understood me ! I never said those three words, but I thought you knew.
P.S 1:My first attempt at 55 fiction.
P.S : A real big thank you to all blogger friends who made my birthday "A day to remember".
Comments
u said a lot from those 55...
kudos
three words?
good work with 55 fic
chriz
sometimes all we want is someone to understand our silence...
BELATED BIRTHDAY WISHES
and hey belated happy birthday. :D hugs!
you haven't put my award on your sidebar.. :(
following you from now on.will come back to read more from you.. :)
thanx!!!!!
thanx !!!
thanx dear!!!!
thanx dear!!!ur comments have ncouraged me a lot!!!
thanx a lot!!!
maybe..u can nvr fathom a woman's heart..its true,believe me..
thanx 4 reading!!!!
thanx 4 reading dear!!n thanx 4 d b'de wishes!!!!
thanx!!!!
thanx 4 reading!!i'm glad u'll visit me oftener now..
i'll put up ur awards on d blog on a special ocassion..plz b a bit patient wid me..(coming soon...)
and hence i bow to thee :D
I enjoyed it. Simple crisp 2 the point and poignant.....
and the picture was apt for the post...
kudos on the good work.
cheers....
muthu
www.average-everyday.blogspot.com
kudos gal....:)
Come back with few more..:)
Cheers
what is it with people and 55 fiction of late?? :)
i love the fact that you take so much care and write in literary writing meters... it isn't easy to limit creativity within prescribed rules..but with the ease with which you write is just brilliant..
really well done
nice one mate... cheers...
Im sorry I missed it..u know I hvnt been ard blogs lately. If u read my 2nd last post...
Nevertheless I hope u had tonns of fun :)
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
mere toh yeh bas ki baat hi nahi!! :)
thanx 4 reading dear!!!
thanx 4 reading!!i read ur posts n i can say u write 55F too well..
sumtyms silence can be most eloquent..but here..it wasnt..
thanx 4 reading dear!!
thanx 4 d ncouragement..
55F might be "style of d season" dear!!anyways,thanx a lot 4 ur reply..i hope u'll like such posts in future too...
thanx a lot!!!
it seems der is another gr8 admirer of my posts after harshita.
Harshita,u'v got sum klos competition wid mayz.n i'm luvin dis :)
thanx a lot!!!!
thanx dear!!!it was a birthday to remember,esp due to blogger frnds..i kno..i'v read ur post..but err..dint comment der..b happy now coz we'r even now..:)
thanx re!!!tere reply ka besabree se intezaar rehta he,kyunki tera harr alfaaz kuch meetha kehta he..
wow..kya shayari hey..wah!wah!!!
now u see-tere bass mein kya kya he..
harry
;) kya shayari thi...
tumhari sabsey badi pankhaa toh main hi hun...
@ Mayz
Kidnap karvaa dun kya?? haha... competition tuff ho raha hain... ;) ;)
Cheers :)
thanx 4 reading!!hope i'll write more..
thanx 4 reading!!!!
thanx ji 4 appreciating my shayari..yes,ur my biggest pankha.
n plz,mayz ko mat uthanaa.saare gal bloggers mere naam ki supaari de dalenge.
lolz
yes...unyielding human heart..
thanx 4 reading!
thanx!!!
Guess I'll never build up the cudgels to write one.
Wonderful !
And sorry for the delay... Wasn't around for quiet sometime...
thanx dear!!
maybe ur fairy godmother ll help u wid 55 fiction...lol..
thanx 4 reading dear!!!n its alwez better to b late than never..
thanx!
thanx dear!!!!!
i felt really better after reading this,
take care and keep writing.......
i mean totally great!
you have it in you!
and on a side note, honey unless you say it, it doesnt hold any imp!
great work! keep it up
And sorry for belated birthday wishes
happy birthday [:)]
you didn't tell me when it is
thanx dear!!!!4 readin as well as d b'de wishes...dun worry..just keep smiling...
thanx a lot!!!!i was glad i cud help u feel better...just keep smiling..
thanx a lot 4 d ncouragement!!!!
do u always have to say it in words? u kno sumtyms silence is most eloquent....
:D too much philosophy i guess
thanx 4 reading n d belated b'de wish!!!!!i'm gonna tell u nxt year..till den,keep smiling :)
keep up the good work :-)
Luv
Amith
thanx!!!!
thanx a lot!!!!!