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ECHOES OF SILENCE




Ever since you went,
Choosing roses has been painful.
Hustling into an empty room,
Overcoming you is impossible.
Every evening I feel you’re
Singing me the tunes I so loved.

Often I see the bird you tamed,
Filling the air with rancour, just like you did.

Shadows of night soothe my wounds;
I still catch your glimpse in my dreams.
Loving you all over again,
Enraptured by your sweet nothings.
Nebulous memories keep me afloat,
Crushing all realities, I lie
Enamoured , smitten by our brief encounters
.

Comments

Phoenix said…
yay me first!!!!
Phoenix said…
you are really good at this acrostic poetry....

these lines are my favorite

>>
Shadows of night soothe my wounds;
I still catch your glimpse in my dreams.
Loving you all over again,
Enraptured by your sweet nothings.
Nebulous memories keep me afloat,
Crushing all realities, I lie
Enamoured , smitten by our brief encounters.<<


brilliant words....
Phoenix said…
ya im ur first second and third too... check out my blog..today and tomorrow 8pm... :)

btw kal mera exam hai..wish me luck... :)
ANWESA said…
@phoenix,
congratulations 4 d 1st,2nd and 3rd position in the comment list !
thanx a lot 4 reading!!!may all the luck of the world be yours forever!
ANWESA said…
@preetilata,
thanx.....
ABHISHEK SiM said…
wow. i m speechless. never read anything even close to this.
ABHISHEK SiM said…
i read it again - and again. bows! GOD-LEVEL! what do I say now? BOWS!
Priya Joyce said…
loved it ..
so r u on an acrostic spree?? :P
Anonymous said…
Goodness!!! That was simply superb :)
Dhanya said…
Very well written :)
ANWESA said…
@abhishek sim,
thanx...i'm overjoyed...glad u liked it so much..
ANWESA said…
@lil' priya,
thanx dear!!!it seems i'm on an acrostic spree...
ANWESA said…
@kido,
thanx dear!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@dhanya,
thanx....
Anonymous said…
Ram Ram!!! Tohar ko reply kar diya hai... Samay milne par dekh lena...

That was very sweet of you... Thank you :)
wow

what was that.....
simply beautiful.......

some times i feel girls are just geniuses ...

happy birthday girl...and u r blogrolled .... :)
Anonymous said…
Wish you a very very very happy birthday, Anwesa :)

Just read Hemanth's blog...

Wish you many many many more fun filled years ahead & joyous time writing :)

My best wishes for all your future endeavours :)

Happy Birthday, once again :)

B/w where's my piece of cake, huh? :D
Ria said…
Yet another amazing creation of yours. :)
Arv said…
wow... those are beautiful echoes :)

nice one mate...

take care... cheers...
ANWESA said…
@kido,
i saw ur reply n re-replied :) thanx a lot 4 d b'de wishes...
cake-->d baker's wife just had a baby,so :)
ANWESA said…
@daydreamer,
thanx 4 reading !!
**some times i feel girls are just geniuses ...

only sometimes? its always..lol..just kidding :)
thanx 4 blogrolling!!
ANWESA said…
@ria,
thanx dear...
ANWESA said…
@arv,
thanx...
many many happy returns of the day anwesha. :)
ANWESA said…
@preetilata,
thanx dear!!!!!
Vani said…
Wow..Dats simply superb!! Luvd it..

Happy B'day Anwesa!! Have a great day :)
WarmSunshine said…
Hey Anwesa, happy birthday dear :)

This was beautiful! Keep up the good work :)

have a great day!
AD said…
many happy returns of the dayyyyyyyyyy!! :D
яノςんム said…
beautiful beautiful :)

happy birthday :)
Chronicwriter said…
is it the mosquito
>?


happy birthday girl

god bless you

chriz
Mayz said…
happy birthday :)
hope u had a great day :)

btw d post completely went over my head
Rushabhh Gandhi said…
Beautiful and Sad...

Fiction?
Amal Bose said…
only one word WOW!!!!!
wonderful work, that too acrostic

brilliant!
In my lineofsight

Adisha said…
Hey there,

Belated Birthday wishes... Just loved your poem... Love and loss ... so touching, and so beautiful !!

cheers,
adisha
ANWESA said…
@vani,
thanx 4 reading as well as b'de wishes!!!
ANWESA said…
@warmsunshine,
thanx dear!!!!
ANWESA said…
@richa,
thanx dear!!!
ANWESA said…
@chronicwriter,
lolz...had it been a mosquito,i wud hav killed it :)
ANWESA said…
@mayz,
thanx 4 d b'de wishes!!!!
wen tym comes,u'll understand d poem,till then keep smiling!!!
ANWESA said…
@rushabh gandhi,
thanx!!!!its fiction 4 me,mite b real 4 sum1 else...
ANWESA said…
@amal bose,
thanx!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@adisha,
thanx a lot dear!!!keep blogging!
Anonymous said…
Anwesa is mastering Acrostics very fast! :) good! :)
Anonymous said…
Back here in ages. i m not sure if i know wot acrostics means, but the lines were magical.
Harshita said…
Beautiful... how do you manage this??

Happy bday sweetie
ANWESA said…
@leo,
thanx!!!
ANWESA said…
@sam,
thanx 4 reading!!!d link 4 acrostics on wiki can be found on this page..just scroll down a bit
ANWESA said…
@harshita,
thanx!!!!!perhaps d long absence 4m blogger did d trick...
sawan said…
luvly!! Anwesa, really.
ANWESA said…
@sawan,
thanx!!!
"Shadows of night soothe my wounds"

thats like the best line i have read in my life, i wondered how you got so many awards, i know know why....

its like the best thing yaar, gr8


i am a fan already ;)


take care and keep writing........
ANWESA said…
@Thousif Raza M B,
thanx a lot!!!!keep smiling!!!

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