Ever since you went,
Choosing roses has been painful.
Hustling into an empty room,
Overcoming you is impossible.
Every evening I feel you’re
Singing me the tunes I so loved.
Often I see the bird you tamed,
Filling the air with rancour, just like you did.
Shadows of night soothe my wounds;
I still catch your glimpse in my dreams.
Loving you all over again,
Enraptured by your sweet nothings.
Nebulous memories keep me afloat,
Crushing all realities, I lie
Enamoured , smitten by our brief encounters.
Choosing roses has been painful.
Hustling into an empty room,
Overcoming you is impossible.
Every evening I feel you’re
Singing me the tunes I so loved.
Often I see the bird you tamed,
Filling the air with rancour, just like you did.
Shadows of night soothe my wounds;
I still catch your glimpse in my dreams.
Loving you all over again,
Enraptured by your sweet nothings.
Nebulous memories keep me afloat,
Crushing all realities, I lie
Enamoured , smitten by our brief encounters.
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these lines are my favorite
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Shadows of night soothe my wounds;
I still catch your glimpse in my dreams.
Loving you all over again,
Enraptured by your sweet nothings.
Nebulous memories keep me afloat,
Crushing all realities, I lie
Enamoured , smitten by our brief encounters.<<
brilliant words....
btw kal mera exam hai..wish me luck... :)
congratulations 4 d 1st,2nd and 3rd position in the comment list !
thanx a lot 4 reading!!!may all the luck of the world be yours forever!
thanx.....
so r u on an acrostic spree?? :P
thanx...i'm overjoyed...glad u liked it so much..
thanx dear!!!it seems i'm on an acrostic spree...
thanx dear!!!!!
thanx....
That was very sweet of you... Thank you :)
what was that.....
simply beautiful.......
some times i feel girls are just geniuses ...
happy birthday girl...and u r blogrolled .... :)
Just read Hemanth's blog...
Wish you many many many more fun filled years ahead & joyous time writing :)
My best wishes for all your future endeavours :)
Happy Birthday, once again :)
B/w where's my piece of cake, huh? :D
nice one mate...
take care... cheers...
i saw ur reply n re-replied :) thanx a lot 4 d b'de wishes...
cake-->d baker's wife just had a baby,so :)
thanx 4 reading !!
**some times i feel girls are just geniuses ...
only sometimes? its always..lol..just kidding :)
thanx 4 blogrolling!!
thanx dear...
thanx...
thanx dear!!!!!
Happy B'day Anwesa!! Have a great day :)
This was beautiful! Keep up the good work :)
have a great day!
happy birthday :)
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happy birthday girl
god bless you
chriz
hope u had a great day :)
btw d post completely went over my head
Fiction?
wonderful work, that too acrostic
brilliant!
In my lineofsight
Belated Birthday wishes... Just loved your poem... Love and loss ... so touching, and so beautiful !!
cheers,
adisha
thanx 4 reading as well as b'de wishes!!!
thanx dear!!!!
thanx...
thanx dear!!!
lolz...had it been a mosquito,i wud hav killed it :)
thanx 4 d b'de wishes!!!!
wen tym comes,u'll understand d poem,till then keep smiling!!!
thanx!!!!its fiction 4 me,mite b real 4 sum1 else...
thanx!!!!!
thanx a lot dear!!!keep blogging!
Happy bday sweetie
thanx!!!
thanx 4 reading!!!d link 4 acrostics on wiki can be found on this page..just scroll down a bit
thanx!!!!!perhaps d long absence 4m blogger did d trick...
thanx!!!
thats like the best line i have read in my life, i wondered how you got so many awards, i know know why....
its like the best thing yaar, gr8
i am a fan already ;)
take care and keep writing........
thanx a lot!!!!keep smiling!!!