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PERHAPS...

One day on the crossroads of life,
He’ll walk in.
Dazzle my eyes with the aura of his arrival,
And rush into my being.

Perhaps its happening now ..

I’ll swoon in his sinewy arms
And he’ll carry me into
The land of our dreams.
Of colourful tapestries and soft feelings.

Perhaps its happening now..

He’ll place me on a plush corner
And I would blush and be his muse.
His hand would run through my hair
And that would feel real great.

Perhaps its happening now…

I can see that I’m sleeping now
Two men in white are bent over me.
They say-“Struck by a speeding truck.
Unidentified. Body no. 287.”

Perhaps I’m dead now….

Comments

Hemanth Potluri said…
beautiful anwe....but y is sad ending...love never always ends with sadness..:) perhaps.. all will succeed :)...have a gr8 sunday :)..

urs..hemu..
Richa said…
oye yaar

come on it was a jump start and the sad endings :(

but it was juz b'ful.. loved it!!
ANWESA said…
@hemanth,
well,here "he" is death.it was a tryst with death.
thanx 4 reading!!
ANWESA said…
@richa,
thanx gal!!!
Pooja said…
u started it so romantically...i thot i wud end beautifully...but 2 my surprise it ended BRILLIANTLY!!!
Tara said…
You have this knack of leaving me speechless everytime...I guess you hate me talk! Lol! An impromptu one-liner there! :)

But seriously Anwesa, very good, I can see the poetess blossoming in full flow...and growing into a very beautiful one! Keep blossoming. :)
ANWESA said…
@pooja,
thanx dear!!!it means a lot if its 4m u...
ANWESA said…
@tara,
i luvd ur instant one-liner,tho i dont agree wid d idea!!(lol)
thanx 4 ur ncouraging reply!!!
Meera said…
Lovely!
I loved the shift .... and the thing about the poem...u know it just reminded me of so many things...
ANWESA said…
@meera,
thanx!!!
peter said…
wtf i got goosebumps while reading the last para

too gud ...cudn't have been better .!!
loved it :D
ANWESA said…
@peter,
thanx...
Mads said…
:| :| :| :| :| :|
that was amazing :|
i hate sad endings but i had to love this one specially because it came all of a sudden in a twist.

u wrote this really really well... :) :)
The Rat... said…
i am hearing this Payaliya song from Dev D.. and this post completely complimented the strong..

OhOh Anwesa... Beautiful!! just Beautiful!!
RiverSoul said…
A beautiful poem, Anwesa
:)
Though the ending was kinda sad, the poem was exceptionally amazing.
Just your natural talent, i'm sure
:)
Gr8 work. Loved this one.
:)
ANWESA said…
@the rat,
thanx!!!!
ANWESA said…
@riversoul,
thanx!!!u words really ncouraged me.
Art and Poetry said…
Great ending! very original
ANWESA said…
@anwesa,
thanx!!!
mayz said…
i wasnt expectin that endin at all...wow!!!
such vivid depiction of unfulfilled desires and discontentment .. !
at least i interpret it that way ..

I won't say its beautiful ...for that would do injustice the emotion of the poem .. I guess the word I am looking for is touching...
aqua gurl said…
thnks for d wishes gurl, n the visit:P:P
sawan said…
o m g, i was grinning at the cupids and look at the way you ended it!!

wuts happening yaar??
Pri said…
all through i was grinning thinking this is the 'valentine day approaching' effect and then u suddenly take me by surprise in the end! :(

that was mean of you to do that to me :-/
ANWESA said…
@towards reclamation,
thanx!!!
ANWESA said…
@aqua gurl,
thanx 4 visiting!!!
ANWESA said…
@sawan,
mayb i was romancing death this tym!!thanx 4 reading!!
ANWESA said…
@pri,
i'm sorry dear,but it came 2 me this way!!thanx 4 reading!!
sawan said…
how does it feel anwesa? and wut pulled you to romance dark?

just curious :P
ANWESA said…
@sawan,
the plight of an unidentified body drove me to write this.or mayb its d february effect...:D
Jinxed Pixie said…
very...err...evanescence
bring me to life typo...
god, ur good...
ANWESA said…
@jinxed pixie,
thanx...
Phoenix said…
know what? i know it will seem errie to you.. but this is exactly how i used to feel or dream of in my man of my dreamz before i fell in love

most spectacular poem!! :D poignant and full of innocent expectation!!
I would like to know if my interpretation was anywhere close to what you had in mind when you wrote it ??? If no .. then what was the emotion .. ?
Femin Susan said…
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job!
ANWESA said…
@phoenix,
really?i find it hard to believe u,but i do.thanx dear 4 reading..
ANWESA said…
@towards reclamation,
yes,u wer close enuf,only it has nothing to do with my personal life.
ANWESA said…
@femin susan,
thanx!!!
Divya said…
huh?? what happened? why did you have to kill the person?? whyyyy??? :O
ANWESA said…
@joiedevivre,
no dear..i'm just xploring emotions..
ANWESA said…
@divya,
here "he" is death...
i was shocked in the end !!

wah good one .
Harshita said…
Ek din teri yeh poetry meri jaan le jaayegi kudiye!!

Wah..wah.. aur dher saari wah...

Rabba! itna bheja mere ko kyun nahi diya...huh!

I am neela-peela and geela in jelousy now...hahaha

It is one of ur best...sahi mein.
Vani said…
Such a beautiful poem.
U started it so romantically..and the ending came as a shock to me. But that's what makes it more special. Gud work. :)
Mithe said…
Its mellow, sweet but yet happy:)
Happy Valentine's Day!
Love is surely in the air....
Mithe said…
Well I read the comment later. I didnot know he represented "death". Wow! what a concept-love with death!
ANWESA said…
@i'll try to be truthful,
thanx 4 reading!!!
ANWESA said…
@harshita,
thanx 4 d punjabi tadka comment..
thanx 4 reading dear!!!n admiring so much!!!
ANWESA said…
@toonfactory,
thanx...
ANWESA said…
@mithe,
thanx!!!!!!
Diana said…
Pehaps am dead now: What an ending dear!!...romantic start though.
ANWESA said…
@diana,
thanx dear!!!

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