One day on the crossroads of life,
He’ll walk in.
Dazzle my eyes with the aura of his arrival,
And rush into my being.
Perhaps its happening now ..
I’ll swoon in his sinewy arms
And he’ll carry me into
The land of our dreams.
Of colourful tapestries and soft feelings.
Perhaps its happening now..
He’ll place me on a plush corner
And I would blush and be his muse.
His hand would run through my hair
And that would feel real great.
Perhaps its happening now…
I can see that I’m sleeping now
Two men in white are bent over me.
They say-“Struck by a speeding truck.
Unidentified. Body no. 287.”
Perhaps I’m dead now….
He’ll walk in.
Dazzle my eyes with the aura of his arrival,
And rush into my being.
Perhaps its happening now ..
I’ll swoon in his sinewy arms
And he’ll carry me into
The land of our dreams.
Of colourful tapestries and soft feelings.
Perhaps its happening now..
He’ll place me on a plush corner
And I would blush and be his muse.
His hand would run through my hair
And that would feel real great.
Perhaps its happening now…
I can see that I’m sleeping now
Two men in white are bent over me.
They say-“Struck by a speeding truck.
Unidentified. Body no. 287.”
Perhaps I’m dead now….
Comments
urs..hemu..
come on it was a jump start and the sad endings :(
but it was juz b'ful.. loved it!!
well,here "he" is death.it was a tryst with death.
thanx 4 reading!!
thanx gal!!!
But seriously Anwesa, very good, I can see the poetess blossoming in full flow...and growing into a very beautiful one! Keep blossoming. :)
thanx dear!!!it means a lot if its 4m u...
i luvd ur instant one-liner,tho i dont agree wid d idea!!(lol)
thanx 4 ur ncouraging reply!!!
I loved the shift .... and the thing about the poem...u know it just reminded me of so many things...
thanx!!!
too gud ...cudn't have been better .!!
loved it :D
thanx...
that was amazing :|
i hate sad endings but i had to love this one specially because it came all of a sudden in a twist.
u wrote this really really well... :) :)
thanx!!!
OhOh Anwesa... Beautiful!! just Beautiful!!
:)
Though the ending was kinda sad, the poem was exceptionally amazing.
Just your natural talent, i'm sure
:)
Gr8 work. Loved this one.
:)
thanx!!!!
thanx!!!u words really ncouraged me.
thanx!!!
thanx!!!
at least i interpret it that way ..
I won't say its beautiful ...for that would do injustice the emotion of the poem .. I guess the word I am looking for is touching...
wuts happening yaar??
that was mean of you to do that to me :-/
thanx!!!
thanx 4 visiting!!!
mayb i was romancing death this tym!!thanx 4 reading!!
i'm sorry dear,but it came 2 me this way!!thanx 4 reading!!
just curious :P
the plight of an unidentified body drove me to write this.or mayb its d february effect...:D
bring me to life typo...
god, ur good...
thanx...
most spectacular poem!! :D poignant and full of innocent expectation!!
really?i find it hard to believe u,but i do.thanx dear 4 reading..
yes,u wer close enuf,only it has nothing to do with my personal life.
thanx!!!
no dear..i'm just xploring emotions..
here "he" is death...
wah good one .
Wah..wah.. aur dher saari wah...
Rabba! itna bheja mere ko kyun nahi diya...huh!
I am neela-peela and geela in jelousy now...hahaha
It is one of ur best...sahi mein.
U started it so romantically..and the ending came as a shock to me. But that's what makes it more special. Gud work. :)
Happy Valentine's Day!
Love is surely in the air....
thanx 4 reading!!!
thanx 4 d punjabi tadka comment..
thanx 4 reading dear!!!n admiring so much!!!
thanx!!!!
thanx...
thanx!!!!!!
thanx dear!!!