I can’t help loving you,
Your harsh tone doesn’t deter me.
May be I’m not quite like the one you dreamt of,
But nevertheless,I can’t help loving you.
Sometimes you shower me with
all affection and care,
And sometimes its pure seething anger I receive.
With reason of course.
Your harsh tone doesn’t deter me.
May be I’m not quite like the one you dreamt of,
But nevertheless,I can’t help loving you.
Sometimes you shower me with
all affection and care,
And sometimes its pure seething anger I receive.
With reason of course.
The look in your eyes speaks of
immeasurable,fathomless love
That you want to bestow on me
Throughout my life and after.
I dared to dream because you
Reposed your faith in me.
You made me feel special.
Not only did you give me birth
But also a life.
Its all your doing Mom,
Its your life that I’m living today.
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proves the fact...that poetry neednt be rhyming!! :)
vinay.
thanx 4 being so kind..thanx a lot..
thanx..ya,also the chandrayan probe landed on moon 2de...
i wanted to tell much more,but words failed me.
"And sometimes its pure seething anger I receive.
With reason of course."
"Its all your doing Mom,
Its your life that I’m living today."
I wish I had more leisure to ponder, to absorb the lines...
Although each life is our own, yet there is such a unique hand of our parent's and dear ones in it...:)
Sorry, I know I'm a bit inconsistent in commenting these days :)
hmmmmm...me neither.. :P
lovely lines...went well with my thoughts :)
kabhi toh pura post padha kar :X
:)
im showing it to my mom :D
"I dared to dream because you
Reposed your faith in me."
Very true indeed! Good job! Keep the good work going! :)
Needless to say, your expressing powers are going up with every post :)
very well written.
and yeah, words do fail when you want to write about special ones.
do check out my blog and comment there.
if you can, ask some readers to check my blog as well
What a dedication..hats off! :)
Exams khatam?
thanx a lot..
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thanx..keep visiting whenever u can..
thanx dear...
not yet,i want to give her a bouquet of my poems at a time.
maybe a pleasant surprise for her!!
????????????did u read b4 posting a comment?
thanx 4 reading..
thanx..
thanx.. wow!!!
thank u..u made me feel wonderful!!
thanx..
thanx...n yes,my xams r ovr 4 now..
thanx...:)
thanx.....
thanx darling!!!
thanx doc!!!
All I will say is that this was a very thoughtful dedication on Children's Day. A moment to think of the person who is responsible for our very breath today.
Wonderfully penned. Kudos.
Trust your exams went well.
Peace. Be well.
thanx 4 reading!!xams went pretty well,i think..
Nice poem. Yup! Mother's love is special indeed! and love itself is special, no matter who gives it, isn't it?
:)
thanx..ya.luv matters...