A s I was walking , C hoosing the hues of life, R ainclouds made an appearance O n the sunny sky above. S cuttling through untrodden paths, T he narrow bylanes,not a soul around, I was indeed lost - Drops of rain C hased me - but Ahoy! a way was found. P.S. :My first attempt on acrostic poetry.Hope my readers will like it. To know more about acrostics,click the link given. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acrostic
Comments
take care and keep writing..........
Metaphor is stunning.
why was she crying :) oooh so many questions come up.. just proves how good the article is .. makes you thing :)
Thank you !
@Ria,
:)
@Tulika,
Thanks ! Glad you liked it.
@Lil' Priya,
Not exactly. Its a kind of telepathy I guess.
@Mayz,
Thanks !
@Priya,
:)
@ DI,
Yeah,it does....
Pleased to see your comment.
@Sushobhan,
I tried flipping the passages as you said. Yes,it sounded well. Maybe I'll experiment with it sometime soon.
@VO,
Thanks !!!
@Simu,
Yeah,I meant it to be 'spooky'. Glad to see that you get what exactly I wanted to convey.