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YOU


Yes,I go…..

To the ends of my imagination…

Beyond the valley and the moors…

Beyond isolation…

Bereft of any blanket….

In the numbing cold….

All I see is shadows in the mist.

Illusions.

Mirages.

But not you.

Yet

I do not lose hope.

I wait for you.
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Shilpa said…
Very sad... is there no end to this wait?
May 17, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Hemanth Potluri said…
pain in the words sis...

urs..hemu..
May 17, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Thousif Raza said…
hope comes in all shapes and sizes..... well i loved this one as i love each and every one :)



take care and keep writing..........
May 17, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Rià said…
Hope the wait ends soon!
May 17, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Bikram said…
wish the wait ends soon ..
you have again written beautifully... loved it

www.mann-bikram.blogspot.com
May 17, 2010 at 8:48 PM
Tulika said…
:)

Yes... An ode to YOU beautifully written.

Loved it!!
May 17, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Pesto Sauce said…
Wait and pain are perhaps synonyms
May 19, 2010 at 8:06 PM
♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said…
ahan ..that was good.. .. for whom it is for ??? i see a tag.. ' only for you' ???
May 20, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Pri said…
hope never dies!! it is immortal and it our constant desire to keep it alive that has made it so :)

well written!
May 23, 2010 at 8:37 AM
viddhi said…
amazingly beautiful/....short simple yet so moving .....loved it ... u have a new follower to your blog .. :) !

keep smiling..! :)
May 23, 2010 at 11:22 PM
Anwesa said…
@Shilpa,
I hope there is an end.
May 27, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Anwesa said…
@Hemu,
Yes,pain aplenty.
May 27, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Anwesa said…
@Thousif,
And your words encouraged me, as always.
May 27, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Anwesa said…
@Ria,
:) That's so sweet of you !
May 27, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Anwesa said…
@Bikramjit,
Thanks !!
May 27, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Anwesa said…
@Tulika,
:) Thanks dear !
May 27, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Anwesa said…
@Pesto Sauce,
Yes,you're almost right.
May 27, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Anwesa said…
@Daydreamer,
Thanks for the compliment !

Yes its "only for you" where "You" is a figment of my imagination.
May 27, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Anwesa said…
@Pri,
thanks dear !
May 27, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Anwesa said…
@Viddhi,
thank you dear !!!
May 27, 2010 at 12:05 PM
redemption ain't dat easy said…
and i will be waiting for you all my life
September 13, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Anwesa said…
@redemption....,

:)

easy to say, hard to do.
September 15, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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