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YOU AND I...


I : I never see you. Yet I trust you. Who are You ?

You (smiles,then looking straight into my eyes) : You really want to know ?
Peep into your soul for once.
You'll find me there, pining for you. 

Comments

ABHISHEK SiM said…
one magical moment...
rainboy said…
Your soul...your spirit... That is 'YOU' You listen too.
Thousif Raza said…
sweet and cute :)

take and keep writing...........
Tulika said…
Beautiful.

And it reminds me of my poem "Infinity".
It's lovely Anwesa di. :)
Priya Joyce said…
Ahhh very beautiful!

and yeh the template too :)
joie de vivre said…
milega milega..
wait is the only ans
ANWESA said…
@Simu,
Yes.. :)
ANWESA said…
@Rainboy,
:) Precisely.
Mithe said…
Beautifully painted Anwesa! How are you? sorry for having stopped commenting...The reason will be on my blog soon in a good long post..
Missed you:)
As for this post..
YOU AND I
in this beautiful World....
profound and intense :-) first time her :) i likes it :)
have a happy week end :)
Jogeshwar said…
I and YOU are the same always. we just need a moment to realise that. neatly composed
Dr Roshan R said…
really nice.. reminded me of another article I'd written years back

http://godyears.blogspot.com/2007/06/to-stranger-i-love.html
alok said…
You & I, different but same.
Amal Bose said…
that was really beautiful :)
brought a smile to my face...
ANWESA said…
@Paramveer,
I liked this interpretation of yours.
ANWESA said…
@Ria,
thanks!!
ANWESA said…
@Shilpa,
thanks!
ANWESA said…
@Thousif,
thanks!!
ANWESA said…
@Tulika,
Yes,I remember the poem.
ANWESA said…
@Aayushi,
thanks!!
ANWESA said…
@lil' priya,
thanks!!! :)
ANWESA said…
@Nikhil,
Yes,bliss it is.
ANWESA said…
@Joie,
:)
:)

*blushes*
ANWESA said…
@Yamini,
thanks!!
ANWESA said…
@Mithe,
Thanks!!
I'm good.
I'm waiting for your post.
:)
ANWESA said…
@Vintage Obsession,
thanks!!!
ANWESA said…
@Gauri,
thanks!!
ANWESA said…
@Jogi,
thanks!! Loved your interpretation.
ANWESA said…
@Dr.Roshan,
I read you post.It was lovely.

Thanks for being here.
ANWESA said…
@Alok,
yes,true.
ANWESA said…
@Amal,
:) Thats how the post gets it due.

Keep smiling !
Nikita said…
gal...u write killing stufff......muuuhaaaaa..
ANWESA said…
@Nikita,
Thanks dear !!!!!

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