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YOU....

Never thought about You….

Drunk in the wine of pleasure…

I ignored You.

You always smiled…

At me.

I didn’t see it coming.

A day when life abandoned me.

My loved one fell silent.

Then You took me in

Your arms.

Made me live again.

The way I never knew.

Filled with bliss.

I could see your footsteps

Unwashed, on the shores of time.

Exactly on the path I traversed.

I was gratified…

Then bewildered…

Then revered You…

You did so much for me.

Even though I never trusted You….

They are so true when they say –

Strange are the ways of the Lord !

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Nikhil Menon said…
Okayyy.. That was your dedication to your YOU right?? Good one.. :)

Love,
Nikhil
February 25, 2010 at 12:04 AM
Tulika said…
Strange are poets. Words enlivened.

What a beautiful verse!
Reading it over n over again...
February 25, 2010 at 12:17 AM
Abhishek Behera said…
"Unwashed, on the shores of time."

beautiful :)
February 25, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Hemanth Potluri said…
so nice sis :)..loved every word..

urs..hemu..
February 25, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Thousif Raza said…
lovely words loved every word :).....


take care and keep writing.............
February 25, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Me said…
for once... can u just write a BAD poem?? a BAD post... :|

I am tired of telling u .. u r so good... :D
February 25, 2010 at 8:54 PM
rainboy said…
beautiful.
very well expressed.
February 26, 2010 at 12:35 AM
Suree said…
wow... excellent poem...

wonderful usage of words...
February 26, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Rajlakshmi said…
such lovely and touching verses... so beautifully penned...
February 27, 2010 at 12:06 AM
IceMaiden said…
Really nice words there! :)

'YOU' is very lucky! :)

Cheers,
Annie.
February 27, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Anwesa said…
@MM,
Yes,that was my You...

:)
February 27, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Anwesa said…
@Tulika,

:)

Its all about those moments you know...
February 27, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Anwesa said…
@Thousif,

Thanks!!!!
February 27, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Anwesa said…
@Harshita,
Maybe the next post :P

Thanks baby!! You made my day :)
February 27, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Anwesa said…
@rainboy,
thanks!!!
February 27, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Anwesa said…
@Suree,
thanks!!!!
February 27, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Anwesa said…
@Rajlakshmi,

Thanks!! Keep visiting :)
February 27, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Anwesa said…
@Annie,

Thanks!!!!
February 27, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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February 27, 2010 at 11:46 PM
Chatterbox said…
Brilliant expression :)
Keep up the good work.

Cheers!!
February 28, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Priya Joyce said…
yehsss..i agree completely...

truely..strange are the ways of the lord...

U expressed each line so very beautifully...
:)
February 28, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Rià said…
good one dear!!
March 1, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Anwesa said…
@Shruti,
Thanks a lot buddy !
March 1, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Anwesa said…
@chatterbox,
thanks mate !
March 1, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
thanks dear !!! glad you liked it.
March 1, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Anwesa said…
@priya,
thanks :)
March 1, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Anwesa said…
@ria,
thanks!!!!
March 1, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Haritha P Singh said…
hey gud poem..feels simple n serene

well kinda writing style of mine
:)
March 10, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Anwesa said…
@Haritha,
:)

Thanks !! Off to explore your writing!! :)
March 12, 2010 at 10:40 PM
The Other Hypocrite said…
exceptional .. well done
March 16, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Anwesa said…
@Jogi,
thanks!!!!
March 16, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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