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THE FACE OF FANTASY


She sat there dazzled. By his grace, charm and presence. She knew he was not to be. It was his wedding after all. But still….her heart yearned for him. She devoured him with her eyes. No one seemed to notice. The world was busy. The bride came. The rituals began. Now he was somebody else’s man.



In a corner of the wedding hall, she stood. Smitten. She went ahead, greeted the new couple. He shook hands with her. An electric spark ran through her body. She was gleefully happy. She had a touch of him now. She came back and after an hour or so, went back home.



That night she dreamt of him. She knew it was him. Now the thirteen year old had to discover the face of her fantasy……

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Nikhil Menon said…
Which 13 year old has such fantasies??Adult-ish at 13?? :O :P

Love,
Nikhil
www.nikhilmenon.blogspot.com
December 23, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Priya Joyce said…
I think teenage is the best part of human life...
specially fantasies :P
December 23, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Rià said…
hmm...thats nice.
December 23, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Thousif Raza said…
well i cant comment on this one... cause its sooo good :)


merry christmas and a happy new year, may gods grace be always on you... and may angels alwayz be with you with every step you take, and with every decision you make :)


take care and keep writing............
December 24, 2009 at 5:46 PM
Rajlakshmi said…
first crush eh!!!
well penned :)
December 24, 2009 at 8:05 PM
Hemanth Potluri said…
awesomely written sis ..:)..

urs..hemu..
December 25, 2009 at 10:06 PM
The Other Hypocrite said…
Loved the post, and I think "She devoured him with her eyes" was the statement that nailed this to perfection... well written..
December 28, 2009 at 1:24 AM
Pankhuri said…
you have been awarded :)

check my blog :)
December 29, 2009 at 10:45 PM
Me said…
:) beautiful...
December 31, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Pooja said…
I cudnt have agreed more with Priya..

lovely write-up!
January 5, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Anwesa said…
@MM,
hmm..many do :P

kiddish(foolish) at 13 :)
January 8, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
yeah :) imagination at its peak :)
January 8, 2010 at 12:39 AM
Anwesa said…
@thousif,
thanks!!!!
January 8, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Anwesa said…
@rajlakshmi,
yeah..fiction tho :)
January 8, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Anwesa said…
@jogi,
:)

thanks!!!!!
January 8, 2010 at 12:41 AM
Anwesa said…
@pankhuri,
thanks!
January 8, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Anwesa said…
@harshita,
:)
thanks!
January 8, 2010 at 12:44 AM
Anwesa said…
@pooja,
thanks!!!!!
January 8, 2010 at 12:44 AM
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