You were a friend….
Maybe I thought so….
In happier times
You smiled back to me.
A year passed…
Fortunes changed…
You were in skies…
Dancing with joy…
And I ….
Ha! On earth….
Struggling to take off….
I did eventually fly…
Met you up again…
You seemed like a stranger…
Moments of pain came…
I cried yet kept afloat…
Maybe I cursed you.
Today we travel together….
You give me a smile…
I don’t return it…
You don’t give up…
Irony…….
Maybe I thought so….
In happier times
You smiled back to me.
A year passed…
Fortunes changed…
You were in skies…
Dancing with joy…
And I ….
Ha! On earth….
Struggling to take off….
I did eventually fly…
Met you up again…
You seemed like a stranger…
Moments of pain came…
I cried yet kept afloat…
Maybe I cursed you.
Today we travel together….
You give me a smile…
I don’t return it…
You don’t give up…
Irony…….
Comments
urs..hemu..
forgive? talk-it-over? some say kiss might also help. :P
deep. dark. good one!
>:D<
Love,
Nikhil
if this is life,i wud better die...
its shameful of opportunists to pose as "friends"...
:( :(
:( :( :(
yes...its sad,piercing and sometimes killing too...
yeah,its not-quite-fiction...
may be i'll forgive someday,but not very soon I guess..
talk-it-over...its a dead thing,talking would freshen up wounds.
I can't kiss too-she's a girl and.....hope you'll understand :P
thanks for your comment...cudn't resist replying to it :)
thanks for that gift-wrapped smile..
made me smile too :)
don't u dare talk about dying!
hmm..i guess i did not try to know the real person behind this "friend" of mine.
Thanks for visiting this post again and speaking your mind :)
and i'm not dying too soon,after all,i've a beautiful life to live and this wonderful blog of mine to take care of :) :) :)
yes,i'm smiling now :) all my anger is gone from my heart...n it was wonderful having you here :)
take care and keep writing.........
thanks for the wondeful compliment. this post was an expression of pain I had nursed since long. Now the pain is gone.
btw,i liked d comparison with spider's web.
bt not sad..i found..it..realization..of one frnd..but amidst of that..the subtle message...that yeh..after all u care only when we r equals..
gud one
This is a lovely blog!!
yeah,it may take a lifetime :(
thanks for visiting...