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TRAPPED...... FOREVER ?


In this tipsy little conglomeration,
Behind the curtains of oppression,
Minds in trepidation-
Is my innocence trapped forever ?

In the maddening crowd,
Amongst the humdrum loud,
Where virtue lies in a shroud-
Is my laughter trapped forever ?

Underneath this somber countenance,
A hope that promises renaissance,
Allures me into peaceful ambience-
Is my soul trapped forever ?

Comments

Sam said…
lovely words. depicting loss of freedom amidst growing factors questioning it.
MultiMenon said…
Ur are never trapped by fate.Its upto every person to take a hold on his/her life and live it accordingly..

So,that makes me say that u are free...ur soul is free..and u are the creator of ur destiny.. :)

Hugz

Nikhil
Ria said…
wow tht was an amazing poem!! Loved the fear expressed so effortlessly.
Leo said…
the fear is expressed with ease, the poems is brilliant anwesa...

it'd have been even better if another verse, saying u are not gonna be trapped, or somethin like that was there... would have made an excellent ending!! :)

but the questioning and the pain, it can be felt... loved it...
Pooja said…
b'ful!!
alas,these questions will always remain unanswered...
Amazingly expressed....!! Could feel every word!
Mayz said…
traps r jus obstacles in our minds...

vy well written
ANWESA said…
@sam,
thanx 4 reading....
ANWESA said…
@multimelon,
thanx 4 ur soothing words...it helped a gr8 deal...
ANWESA said…
@ria,
thanx!!!!
Arv said…
it would be set free when the time comes :)

take care mate... cheers...
яノςんム said…
it happens every now and then :) no matter how much we blow our trumpets of modernization and how much we claim to be nice and equally supportive to our daughters in law, it hapens with every one, ach one of us..

this one is really really a beautiful piece :)

Cheers!!
Priya Joyce said…
talkin abt marriage??
hmm?
AD said…
your soul is freere than u think my friend :)
Surya said…
Unknown get unnoticed generally by the common folk...by the way they are getting trapped..but are unaware of those traps.....
So gifts are committed to appear with those momentory attires of traps or whatever once you are ON THE STAGE!
Be thankful to you at deep sleeps!
hi!! im visitng your blog after quite a while.. real nice poetry... very touching and beautiful! :)
Aneesh said…
No one's soul is trapped forever... Its upto us whether we let it trap or not.
Harshita said…
Hmm... nice one... am not THAT english literate... so I had to consult the dictionary to understand a few things here and wen I understood it, I loved it. :) as always
he what happened seems like you are a lilsad , dont be like that an abt the poetry, awesome as usual, you know anwesa you should change your name to awesome anwesa :D

and your soul is never trapped, just take tings as they come in life good or bad, and just thnk abt the ahppy things more often than the sad ones, you will be flying in no time


hope you felt a lil better.....



take care and keep writing.......
ANWESA said…
@pooja,
thanx 4 reading dear....
ANWESA said…
@aditi,
thanx dear!!!
ANWESA said…
@mayz,
**traps r jus obstacles in our minds...

i agree ...totally..

thanx 4 d appreciation...
ANWESA said…
@arv,
**it would be set free when the time comes :)

waiting 4 that time...
ANWESA said…
@richa,
i luvd ur interpretation....
thanx 4 connecting so well...
ANWESA said…
@lil' priya,
not about marraige...about a game called life :)
ANWESA said…
@AD,
that was optimistic...
ANWESA said…
@surya,
unfortunately i could not comprehend your reply...cud u plz xplain ur viewpoint again?
ANWESA said…
@harini,
thanx dear!!! welcome back...
ANWESA said…
@aneesh,
yeah,i agree...
ANWESA said…
@harshita,
thats why i call u "my greatest admirer on blogger" :)
ANWESA said…
@thousif raza m b,
ur comment has already made me feel happier....thanx 4 reading me so intently....
ANWESA said…
@leo,
thanx a lot for the appreciation...
Surya said…
Unknown get unnoticed generally by the common folk...by the way they are getting trapped..but are unaware of those traps.....
So gifts are committed to appear with those momentory attires of traps or whatever once you are ON THE STAGE!
Be thankful to you at deep sleeps!

...................................
Common stuffs will easily get noticed by the public...they can easily get relate with the common phenonmenon..What is unkown to them, wont get attended also.. That is how they are ending up,themselves in an indirect trap, but are not aware of the same that they are missing the gifts...
Even though the traps on which they are in may compell us to think in such a way that its us who are trapped on the same trap on which they are in, because its our gifts got crushed by their blindness(their traps)!

Innocence,laughter, soul-all will get trapped in the apparent...

Because they dont have the IT in them to read the same, and once you are aware of the truth that-it got unnoticed-then its up to a gifted being like you to understand THEM!

Thats why I told you before, that the gifts are supposed to appear with the momentary attires of traps , still those traps are not meant for you.. Its the traps, in which the majority are born!

But their traps may bring an illusion of "rope and snake" effect that its our trap.. because we are ON THE STAGE same like them, but ON THE STAGE with a born made up inner and them-with a well made up outer!

So be thankful to yourself even at the deep sleeps that you agreed the deal voluntarily-your own sale-at the low ends without much bargains!
Phoenix said…
brilliant imagery!!
ANWESA said…
@surya,
thanks for coming back....i hope i'll understand what exactly you mean someday....

till then tc
ANWESA said…
@phoenix,
thanks dear!!!
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