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I know I hurt you, quarrel with you, fight with you, make you smile again; lose you as well as win you back.
My silence kills you, my whims irritate you.
Your indifference pokes me, carelessness angers me and your words pierce me.
We are still together because ...............................................
we never cease loving each other.

Comments

Dhanya said…
Hmmm... nice! :)

Happens in real life too...
Mampi said…
So so true...
Its my story too....
Arv said…
So true :)

stay that way :)
Keshi said…
beautifully said!

True Love will get u back together again amidst all the tears, quarrels and wutnots :)


Keshi.
Priya Joyce said…
shayad yahi hei pyar :)
nice one
ANWESA said…
@dhanya,
hey,thanx 4 reading!!!!
ANWESA said…
@mampi,
:) nice 2 kno dat....
ANWESA said…
@arv,
thanx 4 reading....

**stay that way :)
yeah,i hope so coz its fiction :)
ANWESA said…
@keshi,
thanx 4 reading!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@lil' priya,
hmmmmmmmmmm............i guess so...
Beautiful anwesa.......

Keep posting such beautiful words...

Cheers
Pesto Sauce said…
Tera mera pyar amar, na jaane kyun lagta hain darr
Anonymous said…
eternal love always bails out ppl out of fights n troubles.

nice one :)

visit my 55 fiction blog @

http://fifty5fiction.blogspot.com/
Anonymous said…
Just as usual, very well put Anwesa di :)

Kudos!!! :)
Ria said…
thats so true!!lovely post. :P
Rajesh said…
What can I say? I's nice!! U hav written it as good as how u hav been writing :)
ANWESA said…
@mahesh,
thanx.....
ANWESA said…
@pesto sauce,
**Tera mera pyar amar, na jaane kyun lagta hain darr

dun mind me sayin dis but this reply seemed 2 me as super-funny
ANWESA said…
@superunknown,
thanx 4 reading!!!!
i'll visit ur blog soon..
ANWESA said…
@miss kido,
thanx!!!!!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@ria,
thanx dear!!!!!
ANWESA said…
@rajesh,
thank u....
beautifully written, as good as it always is :)

guess what, the story you wrote has been on my mind a lot and i mean a lot, i have been telling to everyone i meet and they all liked it very much


so couple of days back i thought of a story its still in the completion stage


you will have a surprise when it gets published in my blog

so be ready to get surprised yet again

this surprise will be the best you will ever have ;)



take care and keep writing......
яノςんム said…
awwwww... this is real lovely :)
ANWESA said…
@thousif raza m b,
it was wonderful 2 read ur reply.
hmm..i'm waiting for the best surprise 4m u.plz do it soon.
ANWESA said…
@richa,
thanx dear!!!!!!
Anurag said…
wow...this was so realistic....
Love the way you narrated it...Different :)
ANWESA said…
@anurag,
thanx!!!
nice 2 see u here..
Anonymous said…
perfect loving couple !!
Smita said…
awww!!!

This is so sweet :)
ABHISHEK SiM said…
the best 55 words i have ever read! was isolated in a no-net region of the world - sorry i m late...
vanilla sky said…
sweetly written :)
ANWESA said…
@pretty me,
hmmm....in fictional world,everything's perfect...
ANWESA said…
@smita,
thanx!!!!
ANWESA said…
@abhishek sim,

**the best 55 words i have ever read!

really ? i nvr xpected such lavish compliments 4m d uncrowned emperor of 55 F.

(thank u!!!) raised to the power infinity
ANWESA said…
@vanilla sky,
thanx!!!!
Gayathri said…
sweet..sometimes the deep emotions for someone comes out in a queerly rude way of silence and irritation just to mean that we love them so much..
ANWESA said…
@gayathri,
welcome 2 my blog!!!i luvd ur comment :)
thanx 4 reading....

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