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I know I hurt you, quarrel with you, fight with you, make you smile again; lose you as well as win you back.
My silence kills you, my whims irritate you.
Your indifference pokes me, carelessness angers me and your words pierce me.
We are still together because ...............................................
we never cease loving each other.
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Dhanya said…
Hmmm... nice! :)

Happens in real life too...
June 18, 2009 at 1:08 AM
Mampi said…
So so true...
Its my story too....
June 18, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Arv said…
So true :)

stay that way :)
June 18, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Keshi said…
beautifully said!

True Love will get u back together again amidst all the tears, quarrels and wutnots :)


Keshi.
June 18, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Priya Joyce said…
shayad yahi hei pyar :)
nice one
June 18, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Anwesa said…
@dhanya,
hey,thanx 4 reading!!!!
June 18, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Anwesa said…
@mampi,
:) nice 2 kno dat....
June 18, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Anwesa said…
@arv,
thanx 4 reading....

**stay that way :)
yeah,i hope so coz its fiction :)
June 18, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Anwesa said…
@keshi,
thanx 4 reading!!!!!
June 18, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
hmmmmmmmmmm............i guess so...
June 18, 2009 at 5:10 PM
Mahesh Sindbandge said…
Beautiful anwesa.......

Keep posting such beautiful words...

Cheers
June 18, 2009 at 7:05 PM
Pesto Sauce said…
Tera mera pyar amar, na jaane kyun lagta hain darr
June 18, 2009 at 8:38 PM
Anonymous said…
eternal love always bails out ppl out of fights n troubles.

nice one :)

visit my 55 fiction blog @

http://fifty5fiction.blogspot.com/
June 18, 2009 at 10:21 PM
Anonymous said…
Just as usual, very well put Anwesa di :)

Kudos!!! :)
June 18, 2009 at 11:16 PM
Rià said…
thats so true!!lovely post. :P
June 18, 2009 at 11:26 PM
Rajesh said…
What can I say? I's nice!! U hav written it as good as how u hav been writing :)
June 19, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Anwesa said…
@mahesh,
thanx.....
June 19, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Anwesa said…
@pesto sauce,
**Tera mera pyar amar, na jaane kyun lagta hain darr

dun mind me sayin dis but this reply seemed 2 me as super-funny
June 19, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Anwesa said…
@superunknown,
thanx 4 reading!!!!
i'll visit ur blog soon..
June 19, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Anwesa said…
@miss kido,
thanx!!!!!!!!!
June 19, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Anwesa said…
@ria,
thanx dear!!!!!
June 19, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Anwesa said…
@rajesh,
thank u....
June 19, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Thousif Raza said…
beautifully written, as good as it always is :)

guess what, the story you wrote has been on my mind a lot and i mean a lot, i have been telling to everyone i meet and they all liked it very much


so couple of days back i thought of a story its still in the completion stage


you will have a surprise when it gets published in my blog

so be ready to get surprised yet again

this surprise will be the best you will ever have ;)



take care and keep writing......
June 19, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Richa said…
awwwww... this is real lovely :)
June 19, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Anwesa said…
@thousif raza m b,
it was wonderful 2 read ur reply.
hmm..i'm waiting for the best surprise 4m u.plz do it soon.
June 19, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Anwesa said…
@richa,
thanx dear!!!!!!
June 19, 2009 at 7:05 PM
Anurag said…
wow...this was so realistic....
Love the way you narrated it...Different :)
June 20, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Anwesa said…
@anurag,
thanx!!!
nice 2 see u here..
June 20, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Anonymous said…
perfect loving couple !!
June 21, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Smita said…
awww!!!

This is so sweet :)
June 21, 2009 at 7:51 PM
Abhishek Behera said…
the best 55 words i have ever read! was isolated in a no-net region of the world - sorry i m late...
June 22, 2009 at 4:11 AM
Anwesa said…
@pretty me,
hmmm....in fictional world,everything's perfect...
June 22, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Anwesa said…
@smita,
thanx!!!!
June 22, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Anwesa said…
@abhishek sim,

**the best 55 words i have ever read!

really ? i nvr xpected such lavish compliments 4m d uncrowned emperor of 55 F.

(thank u!!!) raised to the power infinity
June 22, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Anwesa said…
@vanilla sky,
thanx!!!!
June 22, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Gayathri said…
sweet..sometimes the deep emotions for someone comes out in a queerly rude way of silence and irritation just to mean that we love them so much..
June 24, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Anwesa said…
@gayathri,
welcome 2 my blog!!!i luvd ur comment :)
thanx 4 reading....
June 24, 2009 at 9:57 PM
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