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ACROSTIC - ANOTHER ATTEMPT



Another bright day -
Challenging the spirit of man.
Roused from slumber of sloth,
Overpowering the base desires,
Seemingly naïve yet motivated mind,
Takes on enemy camp unexpectedly.
It is a sight to lo and behold !
Carving a niche for self in the wide world.
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Anonymous said…
hey anwesa,

the words were brilliant! i liked em.

well, i donno all about acrostic dear, but usually the poem should describe the word! i.e an acrostic on anwesa, should describe anwesa. :)

could u try one like that? :)
June 26, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Phoenix said…
very well done.. the concept and the words are simply outstanding... :)
June 26, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Priya Joyce said…
lovely combi of words ther gal..:)
June 26, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Me said…
madam ji... bahut hi badiya... din-ba-dib tarakki ho rahi hain :)

Par main Fan No.1 hi rahungi...
June 26, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Arv said…
pretty well composed :)

take care mate.. cheers...
June 26, 2009 at 8:25 PM
joie de vivre said…
mastt hai
short simple n convincing
June 26, 2009 at 9:59 PM
muZer said…
tatzz a nice Acrostic,, Anwesa.. though haven't written any myself.. but sounds pretty tempting..

urs is gr88.. :-)
June 27, 2009 at 1:26 AM
Amal Bose said…
good work Anwesa..
loved it
June 27, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Mahesh Sindbandge said…
Anwesa,

Very meaningful poem :-)

Cheers
June 27, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Anonymous said…
Ram Ram Anwesa di... Bahut hi badiya hai... Ek dum first-isclass :)

____________________________________

That was beautiful & very well composed :)

Keep writing :) & have a great weekend :)
June 28, 2009 at 1:56 AM
Lucifer said…
whoa!!! poora sar ke upar se nikal gaya
June 28, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Dhanya said…
Nice re!! And beautiful pic to boot :)
June 28, 2009 at 4:24 PM
Unknown said…
Its Kafka, albeit the prose form.

Franz Kafka, has been one of my favourite. And you reminded me of him...

Bourgeoisie people!

Needless to say, Loved it absolutely!
June 28, 2009 at 5:16 PM
Gayathri said…
"Seemingly naïve yet motivated mind,
Takes on enemy camp unexpectedly."
truly loved those lines..short,yet effective..
June 28, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Anwesa said…
@Leo,
thanx 4 d clarification...this post just happened n i cudnt help posting it..i'll follow d rules d next tym i write any acrostic poem
btw,i'm glad dat u liked d words...
June 28, 2009 at 7:25 PM
Anwesa said…
@phoenix,
thanx dear!!!dat was so encouraging...
June 28, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Anwesa said…
@lil' priya,
thanx dear!!!!
June 28, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Anwesa said…
@harshita,
thank u ji...
ur my "biggest admirer on blogger" forever....n i mean it...
June 28, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Anwesa said…
@arv,
thanx!!! :)
June 28, 2009 at 7:42 PM
Anwesa said…
@joidevivre,
thanx....
June 28, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Anwesa said…
@muzer,
thank u...lukin fwd 2 read ur 1st acrostic soon..
June 28, 2009 at 7:58 PM
Anwesa said…
@amal bose,
thank u!!!
June 28, 2009 at 7:58 PM
Anwesa said…
@mahesh,
thank u....
June 28, 2009 at 8:02 PM
Anwesa said…
@miss kido,
dhanyavaad!!!
------------------------------
u too hav a rocking weekend ahead..
June 28, 2009 at 8:17 PM
Anwesa said…
@mayz,
:)
:)
abb aapko hum kya kahein ?
June 28, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Anwesa said…
@dhanya,
thanx dear!!u wer d 1st 1 2 notice d pic...thanx again...
June 28, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Anwesa said…
@rajeev r,
i'm curious 2 kno more abt kafka..
glad dat u liked d post :)
thanx 4 visiting :)
June 28, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Anwesa said…
@gayathri,
thanx a lot!!!luvd u seeing here...
June 28, 2009 at 8:49 PM
rainboy said…
wow again...teach me yaar
June 29, 2009 at 12:17 AM
Shikha Arya said…
heyy...dat was really beautiful...vry nice!!!
June 29, 2009 at 11:02 PM
PULKIT said…
beautifully penned down as well as supported by the pic :)
M FOLLOWING UR BLOG FROM NOW ON!


regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
June 29, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Keshi said…
Carving a niche for self in the wide world indeedz!

Very well-written Anwesa!

Keshi.
July 1, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Anurag said…
i liked it though I couldn't get it :P
July 1, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Thousif Raza said…
Anwesa the poem is beautifully written (AS always ;))

but i agree with leo the name of the poem should portray its overall content

so i too should thank leo for the clarification, thank you leo

and where ru from 5 days???, no updates hmm, write up anything, i loooove to read what you write so get back soon OK


take care and keep writing.......
July 1, 2009 at 7:35 PM
Anwesa said…
@rabbit,
i wud luv to :)
July 1, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Anwesa said…
@shikha,
thanx dear!!nice 2 c u here...
July 1, 2009 at 11:44 PM
Anwesa said…
@pulkit,
thanx 4 reading :)

thanx 4 following the blog...
July 1, 2009 at 11:45 PM
Anwesa said…
@preetilata,
thanx dear!!!
July 1, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Anwesa said…
@keshi,
thanx dear!!!!!
July 1, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Anwesa said…
@thousif raza m b,
yes,dis tym i had violated d norms..sorry 4 dat...but sumtyms words cant control emotions,isnt it ? i guess my next post ll b up soon...in a day or 2..meanwhile i'm waitin 4 a surprise 4m u :) :)
July 1, 2009 at 11:50 PM
Americanising Desi said…
this is remarkable.
i m green eyed now :)
July 2, 2009 at 7:43 PM
Anwesa said…
@AD,
**smiles**
July 2, 2009 at 8:28 PM
Rià said…
beautiful gurl!!u r a pro at it now.
July 6, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Anwesa said…
@ria,
thanx!!!!
July 6, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Abhishek Behera said…
oops really late! sorry :(

loved this one...
July 18, 2009 at 8:57 PM
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