CONTINUED FROM PREVIOUS POST… Eighteen months later…. I was beginning to like my work. It was a challenge sometimes. I had learnt to go beyond boundaries. The dreams which had eluded me once, were dawning as reality now. I had my taste of success and as they say nothing succeeds like success. I had developed a knack for solving my own problems. One day , I chanced by a couple who were seated in a corner of the quaint little coffee shop. I couldn’t believe my eyes…. Divya and Sandip…here of all places. I couldn’t help but confront them. Divya was warmer than ever before and Sandip… I knew he was feeling a bit coy..its so typical of him. But I was more than surprised when he asked me to join them. Though I didn’t refuse, they found me going after five minutes. I invited them for lunch on Sunday. It was a fine Sunday morning and my guests were sharp on time. Divya offered me help in the kitchen and I chose not to refuse. My books kept Sandip busy. She could read my mind and went on with h
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the words were brilliant! i liked em.
well, i donno all about acrostic dear, but usually the poem should describe the word! i.e an acrostic on anwesa, should describe anwesa. :)
could u try one like that? :)
Par main Fan No.1 hi rahungi...
take care mate.. cheers...
short simple n convincing
urs is gr88.. :-)
loved it
Very meaningful poem :-)
Cheers
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That was beautiful & very well composed :)
Keep writing :) & have a great weekend :)
Franz Kafka, has been one of my favourite. And you reminded me of him...
Bourgeoisie people!
Needless to say, Loved it absolutely!
Takes on enemy camp unexpectedly."
truly loved those lines..short,yet effective..
thanx 4 d clarification...this post just happened n i cudnt help posting it..i'll follow d rules d next tym i write any acrostic poem
btw,i'm glad dat u liked d words...
thanx dear!!!dat was so encouraging...
thanx dear!!!!
thank u ji...
ur my "biggest admirer on blogger" forever....n i mean it...
thanx!!! :)
thanx....
thank u...lukin fwd 2 read ur 1st acrostic soon..
thank u!!!
thank u....
dhanyavaad!!!
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u too hav a rocking weekend ahead..
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:)
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thanx dear!!u wer d 1st 1 2 notice d pic...thanx again...
i'm curious 2 kno more abt kafka..
glad dat u liked d post :)
thanx 4 visiting :)
thanx a lot!!!luvd u seeing here...
M FOLLOWING UR BLOG FROM NOW ON!
regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
Very well-written Anwesa!
Keshi.
but i agree with leo the name of the poem should portray its overall content
so i too should thank leo for the clarification, thank you leo
and where ru from 5 days???, no updates hmm, write up anything, i loooove to read what you write so get back soon OK
take care and keep writing.......
i wud luv to :)
thanx dear!!nice 2 c u here...
thanx 4 reading :)
thanx 4 following the blog...
thanx dear!!!
thanx dear!!!!!
:)
:)
yes,dis tym i had violated d norms..sorry 4 dat...but sumtyms words cant control emotions,isnt it ? i guess my next post ll b up soon...in a day or 2..meanwhile i'm waitin 4 a surprise 4m u :) :)
i m green eyed now :)
**smiles**
thanx!!!!
loved this one...
thanks!!