As I was walking ,
Choosing the hues of life,
Rainclouds made an appearance
On the sunny sky above.
Scuttling through untrodden paths,
The narrow bylanes,not a soul around,
I was indeed lost - Drops of rain
Chased me - but Ahoy! a way was found.
P.S. :My first attempt on acrostic poetry.Hope my readers will like it. To know more about acrostics,click the link given.
Comments
have a nice day, cheers..
urs..hemu..
but i dint understand the mood with which you wrote this.. whats the inspiration behind this?
chriz
thanx 4 reading...waiting 2 read ur attempt..
thanx...eagerly waiting 2 read ur acrostic poetry...
wen i wrote this,i aimed at writing an acrostic..no matter what the theme was..her,the narrator gets lost on the way and at the end,a path is seen...it ends on an optimistic note.
thanx...
thanx...i was getting monotonous with many of my readers lately.so thanx again..waiting 2 see acrostics on ur blog..
thanx..
thanx...i'm overjoyed :)
:-) cute one Phoenix..
u missed me and i am here... ask and u shall get :P
gota new idea to start wid...
harry
hi
Loved it very much...looking forward for many more acros from you..!!!
this one is beautiful..!!!
can i safely assume that ur next attempt is that post u wrote... shush... i dont want to let the cat out of the bag... :)
I was waiting for u to post something for a long time and I am glad you came back and that too with a bang... Stay now.
Keshi.
u kno m a big fan of ur words...pity u dont write more often
nice 2 read ur reply,but i'm not phoenix..
thanx 4 reading dear!!waiting 2 read ur post..
thanx dear!!!it was wonderful 2 get such encouraging words from u..
thanx dear!!!
thanx dear!!glad 2 see ur reply..
yes,its my 1st attempt and its wonderful feeling to be appreciated by u so lavishly :D
yes,ur assumption is totally true :)
thanx 4 reading dear...i'll stay for sure..:) after all,i'm starving for dose xtraordinarily superior,mindblowing replies 4m u..
:D
thanx...
thanx dear!!!it means a lot(coming 4m u) :D
thanx dear!!!i'm overwhelmed by this reply!!!lotsa love!!
thanx dear!!!it feels real gr8 to get responses like this..i'll write oftener now since its vacation tym 4 me...
Great going buddy.
btw, what do you do?
Take up professional writing. you would excel in it
Thanks!!!
thanx 4 reading!!!
i'm an engg undergrad;so i can become a professional writer.but i wonder if all my readers ll like to read me :)
welcome to my blog dear!!!i'm waiting to read ur acrostic..:)
thanx a lot!!few months back,i believed i cud nvr write poems,but something happened(i dunno wat) n i wrote poems..this is my 15th poem
maybe ur case ll b similar.after all,they say-poetry is the overflow of powerful emotions.
Keshi.
hmm..ya,ur rite.if all of us were d same,life wud hav been so insipid..thank u my frnd 4 writing so well and complimenting me too...
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good thoughts! :)
an acrostic on an acrostic! :D
thanx!!!i learnt the words "acrostic","loop poetry" after visiting your blog.thanx 4 dat too!!!
sleep well and write..better :P
:)
thanx dear!!!!!
Loved it beyond words. :)
Cheers
thanx dear!!!wonderful to see u here!!!
cheers!
You don't need to think about whether your readers like it or not. All these readers now like your writing and hence they keep visiting you day after day. Take up professional writing and you would be able to give your readers your best :)
Good luck
you have done a gr8 job
thanx!!!!
thanx a lot for the encouragement!!
maybe someday,u'll hold my book in your hands...
thanx 4 reading !!!
thanx 4 reading!!!!
Loved it. Soecially the high spirited way in which you concluded it.
nice !!
thanx dear!!!
thanx dear!!!(i nvr want myself to get lost..so :D)
thanx!!!
thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sounds Vintage Poetry... Felt as if reading from the pages which have faded and turned yellow but still has its fragrance of words and emotions...
thanx....it was a wonderful to see ur reply..
1st timer and i love it already
take care and keep writing.......
thanx...gr8 2 see ur reading my older posts too...thanx a lot!!!