"Death-you are so good a friend
You drop in uninvited.
Life-you are so good a companion,
Its nice to walk with you.
Death-you are so good a reliever,
You redeem all from pain.
Life-you are so loyal an ally,
You make me feel worthy.
Death - I appreciate you -
You are impartial.
You drop in uninvited.
Life-you are so good a companion,
Its nice to walk with you.
Death-you are so good a reliever,
You redeem all from pain.
Life-you are so loyal an ally,
You make me feel worthy.
Death - I appreciate you -
You are impartial.
Life - I love you-
You make men out of mud. "
You make men out of mud. "
These were Vishu's lines.Shweta read them over and over,many times a day,pondering ,on them or Vishu one couldn't say.
To be continued...
Comments
You captivate a reader's attention with the simplest of vocab... you spin magic with words. :)
Anyways... u already know. I am your fan.
I loved this post too...
Keep blogging coz people like you are rare.
thank u 4 ur beautiful appreciation.i'm actually wondering wat 2 do abt my story,hope some miracle happens to my mind n i spin something nice.
thanx..hope u'll lyk d subsequent parts too..
thanx...
good work as usual... :)
thanx 4 d comments.i too thot i cud never rite poetry,but of lately,i'v been riting poems mostly.so u nvr kno wat ur gonna rite.
thanx...
and d concept is excellent. aal d best :)
I know you're for real
Life, you cut me so smooth
I know not, you're surreal
Life you fly me so high
I'm floating in mid-air
Death, you put me so low
I'm six-feet under with no room to spare
WOW!! These friends are too darn cool!! Ain't they?? Life is merely an illusion, death is the reality. Lol!!
See you when I see you...
thanx..
life n death r 2 frnds of ours,1 of wich remains wid us at all times,we can either live or die.
thanx 4 d comments..
thanx..
liked ur verse,but life is so vast dat it the thin lines between real n unreal fade out sometimes,n death so profound that its nothing but real.thanx 4 d comments..
reading this mind wandered a bit... the beginning and end always seem the same - say for example sunset and sunrise, the calm before storm - after storm.
p.s.:they say early bird catches the worm. but what if the worm was late? - my excuse for late comments :)
I like the words
"Death - I appreciate you -
You are impartial"
So true and very well written.
:)
i have a lot of words...
excellent brilliant marvellous captivative thoughtful great....
but they are all to less to describe your poetry these days... it blows me away...!! :)
life and death, two friends... superb...(even that is less!!)
loved it... sort of a ying and yang combination... one cant exist without the other!! :)
its the kind of dark poetry which makes you smile at its sheer ingenuity!!
Loved the contrapositive statements
:)
Death..and life..friends..hah..I like the imagination.
But do you really think Death can redeem pain?
No contradiction thr..right?
thanx 4 ur wonderful comment,ur comments r gettin mor n mor philosophical(signs of a poet in the making).n yes,late comers r welcome too.
thanx...
thanx 4 ur ncouraging words...trying 2 build up the story
Yeah Death s a friend who gives a suprise visit and just takes you along with him away from other friends.
And sure, Life s a sweet companion who may walk away from you at any time and never return. So make the best use of him.
thanx 4 visiting again :)
n thanx 4 d compliments..
thanx..
thanx 4 d compliments dear..
i meant lyf n death r 2 frnds of humanity.n yes,i feel death relieves one 4m physical pain of lyf.
thanx 4 ur comments n i totally agree wid u..
nice poetry and fiction mixed up :)...lovely attempt and nice display image :)...
urs..hemu..
thanx..i'll try 2 rite still better n d display image was gifted by u,remember?
You are awesome at writing such lovely messages with the simplest of words.
Keep it going
well written .:)
perfect words
for the famous antonyms
you knew them till date
and the rest of the world
knows them from now on....
You are impartial
loved these lines!!!
thanx dearie...i hope u'll njoy my subsequent posts..
thanx :)
thanx..
thanx...
thanx 4 ur lovely reply..
thanx...
yes,it will..thanx 4 reading..
Superb!! have nothing more 2 say!!!
Welcome to my blog…….
Wishing you in advance "A Merry X'Mas and A Happy New Year''
thanx...
thanx dear!!surely we'll visit each other..
poem as well as d blog..both r just mind blowing..!!!!too good..!!!
keep it upp...!!!
will visit bak soon..!!!!
cheers..!!!
glad 2 hav u here!!
thanx...keep visiting..
Nice to hear frm you on my blog:)
thanx:)
well written poem:)
keep up the good work:)
Today only was thinking about ur blog Smiley Tissue:):)
cheers!!
take care...
THANX...
death and life...interesting stuff na..
first part is impressive enough to wait for the rest..!!
thanx..welcome back here..keep blogging
Indeed, death is impartial. But do you really think life is an ally...? (No, I am not a morbid cynic.)
Death is a certainty... You enjoy the ride of life till death comes knocking. At that time life is not your ally. It submits to death...
Liked the underlying philosophy...
Peace.
life's always an ally coz it allows u 2 do things which can leave a mark on the world even after death grips one's lyf.
thanx 4 visiting!!
As I said, I liked the underling philosophy...
I SO LOVED THIS POST.. IS THIS SI UR FIRST FICTION ID HATE TO SEE YOU AS AN ESTABLISHED ONE.. GOOD GOING..
THANX AGAIN...
dats alrite buddy,hope u'll njoy the series..
thanx!!