"Its not your eyes,
But the caring look in them
Its not your lips,
But the beautiful smile on them
Its not your appearance,
But your graceful form
Its not your charms,
But your warm, soft expressions
That enraptured my heart.
Made me fall for you.
And made myself yours-
Forever . "
But the caring look in them
Its not your lips,
But the beautiful smile on them
Its not your appearance,
But your graceful form
Its not your charms,
But your warm, soft expressions
That enraptured my heart.
Made me fall for you.
And made myself yours-
Forever . "
-VISHU
Vishu had never mustered enough courage to show it to Shweta,the love of his life.The one who ushered in him a new zeal to live-not merely exist.She was one woman on earth whom he wanted to be his.Forever.
Today,Vishu was thinking of Shweta and only her.Her smile,her caring attitude-everything seemed to have cast a spell on him.Forever.
to be continued...
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**Its not your lips,
But the beautiful smile on them
this line was simply suberb anwe....
its beautful second part :).....
urs..hemu..
P.S: now i am angry wer have u been not visiting me ?huh !..:P..
what may be fiction to one,may b truth 4 another.thanx 4 ur lovely comments.err..i'm sorry i hadn't seen ur blog 4 sumtym now,sorry..
visitin it now...
"And made myself yours-
Forever."
Beautiful words there. :)
(Are Vishu and Shweta real people or fiction? It all seems so real.)
urs..hemu..
I am such a fan of urs... well cant u send me a digital autograph of urs...coz am not sure abt anyone else but you... You will make it really big in the world of creative writing one day :)
from the poetess
one by one.
novel way of story-telling.
didi, you are a trend-setter! know what i mean rite? (I am gonna copy this style soon :P)
thanx dear..a very gud compliment indeed..
well,till now,shweta n vishu r fiction 4 me.dunno if they can bump into any of the bloggers' life..(me included).
:) :)
thanx dearie...bowled over by ur compliments..autograph~u'll b 1st to receive it when tym comes..
well,eagerly waiting 4 ur story series to unfold..ur nothing short of a romantic genius..
if only i cud show u the brilliant dazzling coy smile u'v gifted me rite now!!
:) well,i dont mind if u copy this "style" of mine..
anwi's poetry is getting better with every post ;)
yes,2 b continued...
thanx dearie!!!
and wats the reply only a smile :P..
urs..hemu..
hey where are you anwesa?? no news?? :O
superb...!!!
thanx...
d pic was gifted by u,thanx 4 it.
n yes,u'll kno wat these smileys mean in due tym...
thanx..well,i think i frequent ur blog often...i'm here, blogging, hale n hearty..
:) keep visiting...
thanx dear...
but nobody does it better than u.....
short an crisp, depth n divine :)
well-written Anwesa!
Keshi.
gr88 gng.. beautiful,, indeed.. :-) waitin for da nxt.. :-)
~~Its not your lips,
But the beautiful smile on them~~
loved those lines..!!
thanx...it was a beautiful compliment...keep blogging...
well,i hope so..thanx 4 d compliments.. glad 2 c u here again..
yes,n sometimes there is beauty hidden in danger..
thanx a lot 4 visitin!!hope i'll not disappoint u..
thanx dear...i hope i can carry the story well..
well,ur doubts can b put to rest. for shweta n vishu have not entered my real lyf yet..its wonderful 2 kno dat u lyked dis so much...
thanx..n most of my readers seem 2 lyk that particular line.hope u'll njoy d subsequent parts too...
thanx...thanx ..n more thanx...
:)
thanx..yes,xploring other avenues of writing...
First time here..and i see most of my friends here...
The post is a cute little one to me, but there's a purity in it ..an eternality to it..that's got something to do with true love...
when I see people still holding these as a treasured value, atleast in thoughts..i feel so positive...
loved the visit here
wishes,
devika
its all my imagination,a far cry 4m my real lyf.well,thanx 4 visiting....
thanx 4 visitin..cute???okay,gr8..
thanx for visiting dear..i luvd ur comments.the world is full of good ppl,only they need to use their goodness often.
disclose the mystic n b'ful parts one by one..we're waiting!
thanx....keep blogging..
But the caring look in them
Its not your lips,
But the beautiful smile on them...
Are you talking of two real people here?? I mean real as in the real world... not real in imagination!! :P
Great one!! Anyways, see you when I see you... :)
well,its all imagination.
thanx 4 visiting...
loved it yaar..
Peace.
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Hey, dropping in after ages. Got done with my exams... Off to read what I've missed.
Blog updated. It aint showing up on any blogroll. I hate blogger for doing this to me! x(
thanx...
thanx 4 visiting..don't hate blogger,love it coz it gav u a nice set of frnds...
thanx 4 reading..
beautifully written :)
thanx....
And she wud have blushed and kissed back with these lines from that song (i dont remember the entire song or the lines) "For it was not into my ear you whispered,but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed but my soul "
That wud have been the scene if the girl likes him. Otherwise, like that old MTV ad, 'One Tight Slap'
Fiction or otherwise, the post brought a smile on my lips. :)
Lets move to the next chapter in the saga
well,dat wud have been sumthing else then...but,it happened this way...:)keep reading..sumtyms fiction is not filmi..
thanx!!