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YOU - 55 FICTION

It was easier to hate than love you.



I chose to love you.



It was easier to hold than set you free.



I chose to free you.



It was easier to pretend than be genuine.


I was genuine.



It was easier to forget than forgive you.


I  forgave you…..


And You and I turned "We".



P.S. : An impulsive desire to create happy endings. I had initially ended it as a tragedy. But then this happened.  

Wishing all my readers a Happy New Year ( Mahavishuva Sankranti ) !   

Comments

Shilpa said…
Nice one but it somehow gave me a sad feeling :(
Tulika said…
Beautiful!

The expression is awesome. Loved it. :)
Rià said…
glad tht u turned it into a happy ending!!
Thousif Raza said…
a very happy new year ahead mehek... have plenty of fun :)

as always its genuine and its awesome... simple yet superb :)

take care and keep writing...............
rainboy said…
Wow yaar...dil khush ho gaya...
mast :)
thank you... this made me smile.

take care :)
Bikram said…
Nice one .. Wish I had the guts and the qualities to do all that .. Free someone, Love someone , forgive someone .....

But you wrote beautiful...
really nice one :) happy endings are good :)
Vinay Leo R. said…
yeah, happy endings are good. this flowed eloquently anwe..
Shilpa said…
Hey...There is an award for you at my blog :)
Anwesa said…
@Jogi,
thanks!!!
Anwesa said…
@AD,
thanks!!!
Anwesa said…
@CL,
thank you!!!!
Anwesa said…
@Shilpa,
Maybe coz anyone has to work (a lot) to make a relationship successful.
Anwesa said…
@Tulika,
thanks!!!!
Anwesa said…
@Ria,
:)
Yeah :)

Thanks!!
Anwesa said…
@Simu,
:) Thanks!!!!
Anwesa said…
@Thousif,
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anwesa said…
@rainboy,
thanks!!!!!
Anwesa said…
@Bikram,
:)
thanks!!!
Anwesa said…
@Aditi,
thanks!!!
Anwesa said…
@Leo,
thanks!! :)
Anwesa said…
@Manjari.
thanks!!!
Anwesa said…
@Shilpa,
sorry but cudn't see where I was awarded.
and i did all this for an unkempt promise
Anwesa said…
@redemption.....,

:)

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