You may see her coy hands in the palanquin,
A joy of a new life.
The veil covers her face-
Beneath it a cocktail of emotions.
She leaves for her man’s home.
The man who would fill her life
With mirth, prosperity and children.
The first few days are bliss.
Both lost in the magical world of love.
Then comes the pain of separation.
She treasures that kiss on her forehead,
Losing herself amidst his family.
She pines for him each day,
Reads his letters many times over.
Her life is a patient wait now.
He comes back again, she renews her pledge
To be his forever. She is in ecstasy.
He adds that completeness into her life.
But rushes back before she could tell it to him.
He risks it all this time.
Her face is all that he can recall
In those final moments.
She shrieks,she breaks apart
Just like those red glass bangles.
Then one fine day, she hears about
The gallantry of her man from “big” people.
Her heart bleeds yet she stands still.
She is someone called……
A war widow.
A joy of a new life.
The veil covers her face-
Beneath it a cocktail of emotions.
She leaves for her man’s home.
The man who would fill her life
With mirth, prosperity and children.
The first few days are bliss.
Both lost in the magical world of love.
Then comes the pain of separation.
She treasures that kiss on her forehead,
Losing herself amidst his family.
She pines for him each day,
Reads his letters many times over.
Her life is a patient wait now.
He comes back again, she renews her pledge
To be his forever. She is in ecstasy.
He adds that completeness into her life.
But rushes back before she could tell it to him.
He risks it all this time.
Her face is all that he can recall
In those final moments.
She shrieks,she breaks apart
Just like those red glass bangles.
Then one fine day, she hears about
The gallantry of her man from “big” people.
Her heart bleeds yet she stands still.
She is someone called……
A war widow.
Comments
urs..hemu..
very very beautifully written..with subtle expressions :)
just wondring if you had someone spl on your mind wen you pord these emotions down here ...!!
But you crafted in a simple way so that the reader too could feel the pain...!!
well written mate...
take care and keep writing.........
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Love,
Nikhil
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thanks!!!glad to see you here...
thanks!!!!!
thanks for coming!!!
yes,its true. Salutes to the women who stand still while their husbands/sons get the gallantry awards on 26th January....
thanks dearie!!!!
thanks!!!!
good to know you doing well now..
i was inspired by a picture of broken glass bangles...
thank you!!!!!
thanks a lot!!!! it was great to read your reply...
thanks!!!!
thanks for the compliment!!!
But I didn't change my name. Raza Thousif calls me Mehek :)
thanks!!!!
thanks!!!!!
thanks dear!!!!!
TC keep writing
Keshi.
:) of course,i remember you dear!!!
you were one the first persons i knew as a blogger.You gave me my first award on blogger and its still there on my blog.
i know u'v taken a break from blogging but your posts are all treasured in the mind of this lil' reader of yours...lov ya...
m still waiting for you to re-join bloggerville...I miss my Keshi :(
TC n keep writing!
Keshi.
:)
I am especially always touched by this subject. It always bring me to tears whenever i read about the story of a hero's surviving family member.
Thank you for you comment on my 55 fiction entry "Last Grip". I'm wondering if you've got entry. :)
thanks for the compliments!!
I guess you've read my entry "It's Dead" on the Colors magazine.
things like this are heart-wrenching.....
thanks a lot!!!
Its one of my favs too....
It captures the agonies of a war widow so intensely.
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thanks !
thanks !