There were so many things
I wanted to tell you,
But you went away before
I could gather my courage.
Years rolled by
But you never answered my letters.
I thought you had
Forgotten me.
The rains brought you back
To my doorsteps.
You were a homeless tramp,
A lost man in the battle of life.
Little did I know
What you were upto.
I smiled at my luck
My dream was turning real.
But you betrayed me again.
You repaid me too well.
Slit my throat when I was sleeping,
Dreaming of you and me together.
Now I write in my own blood
The saga of cruel pain you gave me.
Avenge I shall,
But how can I hurt my own love ?
I wanted to tell you,
But you went away before
I could gather my courage.
Years rolled by
But you never answered my letters.
I thought you had
Forgotten me.
The rains brought you back
To my doorsteps.
You were a homeless tramp,
A lost man in the battle of life.
Little did I know
What you were upto.
I smiled at my luck
My dream was turning real.
But you betrayed me again.
You repaid me too well.
Slit my throat when I was sleeping,
Dreaming of you and me together.
Now I write in my own blood
The saga of cruel pain you gave me.
Avenge I shall,
But how can I hurt my own love ?
Comments
They say in samskrita Kshamaya dharitri Naari (Forgiveness is the essence of a lady). But many seemed to have pushed her over the edge that forgiveness becomes impossible.
thanx 4 reading!!der r some sins which cannot be forgiven,yet unyielding,foolish human heart-hoping beyond hope and dreaming of what will never be!!
urs..hemu..
thanx 4 reading!!
thanx dear!!
thanx gal!!
thanx dear!!!
But sometimes even our love can be hurt.just to prove that we love him/her!
its realy piognant..
beautiful.. i got no words to say anything more than tht.. u left me awestruck!!
thanx!!n thanx 2 phoenix 4 ngivin me d award..yes,love does hurt..
thanx!!
Gals always cry about these things on their blogs ..i believe these matters are way too personal.
and yeah sorry i dun mean anythng -ve ..poem is lovely but cliche :|
happy blogging !
yes,gals cry out der sorrows on blog.but 4 me it was sheer imagination.n i'm glad it sounded real.:)thanx 4 reading it!!!
thanx!!
thanx!!
thanx!!
tc
Mua jane, bhuatkichi aame kahu ba lekhu kintu aame saada bele gotia prasana ra uttar paeinki jeevan sara kujibuli thau. There is no life beyond your imaginations and no love beyond your life. Many times it sounds me as if a fake reality or maybe a bitter truth.
thanx!!
prathame "kabi" kahibaa pain dhanyabad!tuma reply khoob sundar heichi,sabubele mane rakhibaaku chesta karibi..
Thanks for the linking of my post:)
thanx dear!!
thanx dear!!mayb it was a telepathy.
How can I hurt my own love?
Sometimes you will
:)
thanx 4 reading!!
thanx!!
anwesa, u know what.. i sometimes laugh at life :) some how ive seen too much of love in the name of people who havnt learned to respect it! life many a times play insane :) maybe there is a logic that i failed to see !!
i agree wid u bro!sumtyms we fail 2 get d logic of things.n den begins trauma!!thanx 4 reading!
how true!!n yes,i'm glad u liked this!
thanx dear!
Keshi.
unlike Suresh would like to quote that the female of every species is deadlier than the male. and nothing is as dangerous as a woman spurned...
so avenge you must...if only to stay true to your gender...
thanx!!
thanx!!
thanx 4 reading!yes,wounded females r vry dangerous,but somewhere they r as soft as butter.
its nvr easy 2 hurt sum1 u luv.
n i liked d last line of ur reply..