I cannot let myself die,
Only because you don’t like me.
You are replacable.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because you hurt me.
You can be tamed.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because I pledged to be with you.
Promises can be broken.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because you forsake me.
My world never ended with you.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because we can never be together.
Many people consider me their life.
Only because you don’t like me.
You are replacable.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because you hurt me.
You can be tamed.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because I pledged to be with you.
Promises can be broken.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because you forsake me.
My world never ended with you.
I cannot let myself die,
Only because we can never be together.
Many people consider me their life.
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the voice of every individual who has ever been abused by a fellow-being.
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Wonderful work, Anwesa
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thanx..may we stand together at this hour of need..
thanx..i'm praying for the battle 2 end..
ya,d undying spirit..
thanx..hope someday things will improve..
thanx 4 reading..i hope this trauma ends soon enuf..
i can understand ur feelings,lil' priya.a similar thing happened 2 me wen i heard abt d killer tsunami of 2005.
hope d power heals d hurt souls..
thanx 4 reading..
thanx dear..d nation will certainly rise out of ashes(like phoenix) n pay respects to those who gave up their lives so that we may live.
thanx 4 reading..we must alwez stand 4 our rights.
We are here to stay!
:)
Only because we can never be together.
Many people consider me their life.
loved these lines....very true
count the smiles for you
not those who dont care
but those who love you
I cannot let myself die,
Only because I want to read ur blogs
:) :)
thanx..
thanx..hope all's well soon..
thanx...
thanx..
may u live a 100 yrs!!n i'm ovrwhelmed by ur words!!
may peace prevail....
yes,dats d spirit of a nation.
amen to peace!!
thanx..
thanx..if only peace cud prevail forever..
You're proving out to be real good at poetry..
The last para was the killer.."I am the life for so many"..that was the spirit.
And another punching line was the "promises can be broken " one..
Kudos!
thanx dear.one who doesn't respect another fellow-being does not deserve 2 b luvd or cared for.
the nation bleeds due 2 such insensitive individuals.
No one can kill our spirits, that easily.
i hope we dont succumb 2 evil designs..
urs..hemu..
thanx..
thanx..
no more sorrows...no more fear...its fire now...they will ace the breath of d sleepin dragon
Do you really knw hoe talented you are?
..very powerful n strong..
thanx..it was d spirit with which i wrote
thanx..i'm actually blessed 2 get a reader lyk u..i really dunno wat makes me rite poetic lines,but now,ur a cause of it.ur one of my best readers n i shall try my best to live upto the benchmark u'v shown me.
lots of luv,
anwesa
thanx..INDIANS ARE NOT BORN TO DIE..
Stay safe sweetz.
Keshi.
thanx frnd..Vande Mataram!
xactly,thats the spirit of a peace-loving nation.
take care.
thanx..its not the power of an individual,the power of a nation..
ya,dats a spirit of peace n war against terror.
thanx gal..
Could relate it to myself.Would like to tell that to someone actually.
Well written and it has got The power!
//And thanks for visiting my blog.Is Anwesa your name?What does it mean,if you don't mind telling me?Just curious as I have never heard it before.//
thanx..
thanx dear..yes,anwesa is my name.
it means "a will to discover."
n it was sweet of u 2 ask dat.
loved the spirit
very powerful poem.
take care:)
thanx..
thanx..
Peace.
good work girl :)
thanx..
thanx..
thanx..keep visiting..
thanx...
Just because of a heartless creep...
For, I've heard 'love' can do wonders.
That carnage still looms large. Terrible...
Nicely penned Anwesa...
thanx 4 visiting.the post was abt saving one's grace n honor,be it individual or of a nation.